So, here's another one, and I've actually started writing this one, so let me know if u think I should post it...

Mallory is an anything-but-regular girl who lives in alone in a house in the woods of Iaundôr. She is a skilled fighter, which is, apparently, not a good thing, especially for a young woman. She has her skills- mostly sharpshooting, and knife and dagger fighting, but lives a peaceful life. That is until she sees something she isn't supposed too- a silver-white haired ellon fighting some sort of wolf-like creature in an alley. She decides to join the fight. When she pulls out her knives and daggers, he sees her with her knives out, staring daggers at the creature, and does a double take. Or course, he gets bitten on the shoulder. Ugh, men Ellons. She kills it.

    He was fighting it, and he was winning. Then he saw her, and her silver knives, glinting in the light. But it was different this time... because she saw him. And it. She could see them. She could fight them. A sharp pain in his shoulder. He collapsed and saw the beast go down at the same time. She killed it. She... She...

She checked his shoulder. It was badly wounded. Poisoned.

What do you think? Is it too vague? pls comment and let me know.