Title: Blondie's Dancer

Written by: djgraves01

Genre: Fanfiction

Reviewed by: Pournu

Ratings: 5/5.

Title, Cover and Description:

Yayyy!!!!! you have our attention.The title definitely piques our interest. Good job.  Next comes the cover. Its simple and nice but could be a bit more creative. Just a suggestion though. Lets have a look at your description. A cliffhanger in description, thats a new one but i found it a bit vague as it didn't give much info about the book.  For me description is like the gist of the book. Not necessary that you disclose everything but at the same time give us something to look forward to.

First Chapter:

Beautiful chapter. It had a beautiful introduction and i got to meet the beautiful family and her passion for dance. All the characters were beautiful and they definitely adds more to the story. you aren't revealing anything are you ? First chapter was very interesting but there wasn't any hint how it is gonna proceed futher. Now Iam even more curious as to what is gonna happen next? . I am turning pages now.

Character development:

I love the idea of self characterization. I loved her intro and her attitude. Wish I could borrow it. Alas she is fictional. *Deep sigh*. Her attitude towards her ex all the girls learn from her. Her love towards her mom is cute.  I love how they meet each other and poor Corbyn is stunned. Her best friend is also lovely. Christina is playing dirty already. I love Eben he is the Jealous element of the story. All the band mates are lovely. Kay is another cute addition. As a whole entire cast and crew is lovely.

Plot and storyline:

An age old plot but you have turned it into your own with your way of writing and that's a great thing as a writer. yet another brilliant stroke of your pen and the twist and turns are amazing.  There's nothing new when two people fall in love but the way yours do is fun. Story line is also awesome. Keep it up.

Grammar and Detailing:

The flow was smooth with the non existent grammatical errors and typos. It has some detailing but at the same time would like some more detailing too. And you can never stop improving when it comes to grammar. 

My view as a Reader:

I loved the attitude of female lead and Corbyn is lovely.  It was a smooth flow and an interesting addition to my reading list. Cheers to you for an awesome story and it had the best characters more like best people and i wish they were real. I could envision all the happenings as i read and that is awesome and kudos to you as many can't do this. Thanks for the lovely book and definitely i can't wait to read sequel. All the best for your future works and keep writing more and more so we can enjoy reading it.