Title: If we Found Heaven

Written by : scarlettlantsov

Genre: Romance

Reviewed by: Pournu

Ratings:  4.5/5.

Cover , Title and Description:

Cover is simple and neat. But you can go for a little bit more complex cover as it is the pictorial representation of your story. Also the author's name isn't clearly visible so do have a look at it. Good job on the title. Usually Long titles aren't that catchy or curious but you managed to do so. A beautiful description. I am impressed with your description and it definitely wants me to take a look into the book and read more. Let's peep in.

First Chapter:

I loved it. The irony of beginning sentence and ending is beautiful. You described the typical high school day if in the best way possible if not better. Bullies are everywhere. The way he reacted was actually portrayed well. The three odd balls are lovely and someone already has a crush even if he didn't realize it himself. Overall a wonderful start to the story. And I am excited to know more about those odd balls.

Character Development:

I am in love with all the characters. I am unsure of whom to pick as my favorite . Of-course I am  not talking about the bullies. Ugh I hate them.  Cass is kinda unpredictable but good at heart. Julie is love and lets hope she gets her love.  Art I kinda feel your frustration. Reid you are the perfect addition to the odd balls.  Julie is the peacemaker I suppose.Laura man I hate you just after the initial meeting. Marie I love you man. You are quite a good person at heart. Art's parents aren't here yet. I wonder how they are gonna be. Your characters are lovely and I already fell in love with them especially Julie. 

 Grammar and Detailing:

There is no grammatical errors or typos. Your vocabulary is good and the detailing maybe a little bit more.  But overall I loved your book and when it comes to grammar there is always room for improvement. Keep up the good work keep writing more and more.

My view as a Reader:

Fell in love with the book as soon as I read the description. It was a fun ride with douches and bullies all around to torment the odd balls and figuring out your gender preference in a homophobic society there is nothing worse than that. I could feel the pain of Art as being labelled for something that he is free to choose and all his other qualities are being degraded or ignored just because of this.   Oh no! I forgot about our other two love birds . Cass and her plan for Reid was something unexpected . Julie its high time you express your feelings to Cass or you'll end up getting hurt.  Can't wait to see what happens next. Let's hope all the love birds come together and fall for each other.