Story: I wish I Could say YES by ishqdinoorhai3

Genre: Teen Fiction

No. of chapters: 8 (incl. of Prologue)  ONGOING

Title: Beautiful. Though it may appear too long for a title, it really does justice to the plot.
(10/10)

Cover: Simple and gorgeous.
(10/10)

Description: The way the characters' emotions and the scenario have been put up is very good. Especially, the poems at the end of each chapter is commendable.
(8/10)

Prologue: Interesting. It intrigues a sense of suspense and interest in the reader.
(9/10)

Plot: It is a sweet teen fiction. Two young people trying to heal each other, knowingly or unknowingly.
(9/10)

Character Development: The protagonists have been portrayed beautifully. Their conversation, gestures are very sweet and natural as per their characteristics. However, the supporting characters must be given a more importance.
(7/10)

Story Telling: The pace of the story, perhaps, is a bit too slow for its own good. A little push is the pace migjt be beneficial. The story has barely started off though.
(8/10)

Language and Grammar: Very minor grammatical mistakes, especially in tense which will gradually improve with time. Language used is simple and easy to understand. Punctuation is perfect.
(9/10)

PROS:
>Steady plot.
>Perfect punctuation.
>Almost perfect grammar.
>Beautiful title.
>Apt cover.

CONS:
>Less importance to supporting characters.
>Minor tense errors.
>A bit too slow.

To the author,

I strongly feel you can be a much better writer than you are today. Open yourself up to new books. You have a good grip in the language. However, some time has to be spent in grammar and tense. I really loved yours story. Lastly, try to improvise the prologue if you can.  Make it a bit different than the blurb. Love and best wishes. Stay safe.

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I would like to recommend this book to everyone, especially to the readers who love ready teen fiction. Its a beautiful story about two beautiful young minds.

Thank you.

Reviewed and published by _sarcasticpanda