First of all, Happy Father's Day!

Now, onto the rant

Now, I'm a sucker for some good fan fictions,

But don't you just hate it when there are some pretty sucky fanfictions out there that just succeed?

Also:

It absolutely grinds my gears when people don't make paragraphs! Not even when they do dialogue! UGH! Make the story even people!

Not to mention; the thing that peeves me the most:

          "Hey did you hear about the game last night?" Dmitri said. John replied,"Yeah man! It was awesome! Don't you think?" "Well, I thought it was complete bull crap!"

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THAT GETS ON MY NERVES SO MUCH! IT'S NIT GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT! LEARN YOUR PUNCTUATION

GAH!

Sorry.