Sneak-peak of The Forgotten Tribe

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Okay so earlier in my art book I posted a new tribe called The LightWings.

And I said how my friend and I are writing a story about two twin Dragonets one with to much electricity named Flash, the other with pretty much none named Dawn.

Well, When Dawns Grand-mother Sunrise is on her death bed, the LightWings throne goes to the second eldest of three Sunshine, but when Sunset the youngest of the three sister hears about this she becomes furious. So she plans with the NightWings to kidnap her Niece's daughter, who is Dawn.

That wouldn't be a problem as long and Dawn has her amulet. This Amulet in animus touched, making her able to see with vibrations on the air and ground, given to her by her grandfather Nimbus. But when the NightWings and Sunset kidnap her they take her amulet leaving her defenseless.

Okay I think that sums up what I'm about to put down.

Here is a little preview of The Forgotten Tribe. This is when Dawn is in her cell on the NightWing island 2,000 years ago, just after they betrayed Darkstalker so some of them still have there real powers.

(( also the POV changes in this story for Dawns brother Flashes POV, to hers and then back.(kind if like Allegiant if you've read it)))

(P.s. can you figure out the Mystery dragons name from his riddle? :3)

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The Forgotten Tribe

Dawn-

*scrap**scrap**scrap*
I laid there in my cell wondering what was going on outside. All I saw was darkness, without my amulet I'm nothing. I carved the stone underneath me feeling as I carve the face of my mother. I remember an important thing she told me when I was smaller,

" I'm useless, pathetic" I hear myself say.

"Dawn!" My mother stares at me anger in her voice. " how can you say such a thing?"

" look at me mother I'm blind, I have no electricity, Nothing!" I say hanging my head. My mother cups my chin in the talon and does my head up.

" you are not useless, you are a strong willed Dragonet, capable of extraordinary thing. It may not seem like it at times but you can do so much as long as you are brave." She says with care and compassion in her voice now.

" Remember this Dawn, you are loved, and will always be, no matter what, I will alway be with you." She says as she pulls me in for a hug.

A tear slips it's way threw my eye.
I think of my family. My father, his rough talons touching my face, his soft gentle voice. My mother, her beautiful voice when she would sing to us when we were young. Flash, his smart comments, but caring self.
Oh I miss them so much. If only I could-

"Hey, what are you doing?" A male voice says interrupting my thoughts.
"Go away" I say sternly.
"Awe, but I would like to stay with you."he says
" I would rather fall in lava." I hiss back
"Ouch, that hurt." I hear him say. Ugh I could claw him if I wanted to.
I turn my head away from Mr. No name and continue scraping my mothers beautiful face.
"Are these your family's faces?" I hear him say
" I thought I told you to go away!" I halfway yell at him.
"Hey, no need to be angry, I was just curious, I've never seen anyone do that before." He says outside my prison
I snort,"try never being able to see at all." I say to him quietly.
"O-oh. I'm sorry I-I didn't know." He says with what seems like sadness in his voice.
* he seems nice, NO stop it Dawn, these dragons took you from your family, they can't be trusted* I think to myself.
" actually some of us can be trusted" say the no names dragon.
" How dare you read my mind" I say standing up with anger in my voice. " just because you have the power to doesn't mean you can use it on random dragons!" I snarl at him.
" I'm sorry I'm sorry, I didn't think it would bother you so much." He said hesitantly.
" well it does!" I hiss at him
* what is his problem, why must Mr. No name have to be here. Why can't I be by myself.* I think to myself.
" Hey dragon, what's your name?" I ask him straight out.
" woah what?" He ask back in shock
" what is your name?" I ask again more slowly.
" why do you need to know?" He ask
" I at least need to know one dragons name on this stinky little island" I say back to him.
" well, lets make this a game shall we?" He ask.
" no lets not" I say with irritation.
" oh but we must." He says " okay if you want to know my name you must solve this riddle." He says sounding amused
" Ugh, fine. " I say sitting down.
"Okay here is your riddle,

*While you are dawn
I am the reverse
The sun falls due west
And rises due east
You bring forth the light
And I call forth the night*"

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Here's Flash and Dawn family tree. :)

Bolt- father
Storm- mother
Nimbus- Grandfather
Sunrise- Grandmother
Sunshine- great aunt
Sunset- great aunt
Thunderclaws(Sunsets mate)- great uncle
Cloud(Sunshines mate)- great uncle

Kk that's all for now tell me what you think and your ideas of what his name is! :) Bye bye

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