Old

The old drawing is a little bit unimproved.
Let's get straight to the point...
In this drawing, the hair is messy and in an unsettling position of it.
The eyebrows are too thin, the eyes are too big 
And the lips are in a weird shape.
Nose is too big and the shape of the face is unusual
No shadow and highlights on

{new} Redraw

On the redraw it's not really the same as the old, i did a redesign on her hair and blouse. I darkened her hair and made it long and less messy and more thick lookin.

On the old one her hair is a bit lighter and no shade
And as you guys can see on the redraw, i redesign her hair and darken it's color, i still put the pins on.

The old drawing she is wearing a shirt, no highlights and no design too.
The new one i didn't make it the same as the the Old. So i made it a sweater with a design just to make it pair on elacrystal123 drawing.

On her face i added shadows and made her face an oblong shape, her nose i made it almost a circle and made her mouth like she was almost smirking, I'd add shadow on it to make it pair with the color of her face.

The eyes and eyebrows are a little bit tricky,
The old drawing's eyes were like an indigo color
{i am very sorry I'm color blind}
On the redraw i used sky blue and navy blue
And i darkened the pupils to make it look like natural.

I hope you are all enjoy!

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