Okay, look-

So I was reading this fanfic and the whole premise of it was that Zane's mom died and they never find the killer and Zane is a Meif'wa and no one knows

So here's the thing Damien and Kawaii-Chan are dating and Zane likes Kawaii-Chan and he knows that and Damien knows that he also know's Zane is a Meif'wa and Damien is a Werewolf.

OKAY FIRST THING

No one knows Zane is a Meif'wa not even Garroth.

LIKE HOW-

So you're saying even when he was a little kid when he was born he had been hiding his ears and tail

That's some dedication I need my life-

So they go to A-Con and Damien starts beating up Zane and no one notices how this is happening.

You can only trip over yourself a few times until people get suspicious when you've never done it before.

 So eventually they reveal Meif'wa's are weak to Moonstones and Zane chokes on one and passes out. Nothing ever happens of that again until it's mentioned a couple of times.

Eventually, after telling Kawaii-Chan, he's a Meif'wa because he's forced too he gets beat up again and leaves.

He for some reason accepts Coffee with Damien even though he beat him up. Don't know why you would do that. He tells him now that Zane isn't at A-Con anymore he won't beat up and Zane's like 'Okay' and then he faints due to something being in the drink.

Wakes up in a cage in a building with cages full of Meif'wa's. Texts Kawaii-Chan that he's in danger. Some figure goes in to kill a cell full of Meif'wa's nearby to the point where it's full of corpses.

Walks to where Zane is and reveals it's Ein, he's killing Meif'wa's because Aphmau liked a Meif'wa and high school when I'm pretty sure it was the other way around. Drags him out of the cage and brings him into a room full of cameras and ties him to the pole. He sends everyone a live video of him beating up Zane from Damien's phone.

Did I forget to mention that Ein is using a potion to make him a Werewolf.

No information on how he tied him up, is he sitting standing. I wanna know this because he kicks him in the stomach and punches him in the face, how does this happen???

Like this???;

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(The drawing was bad on purpose.)

after Ein turns off the camera's and leaves the room Zane texts Kawaii-Chan morse code with Damien's phone again.

Goes back into his room and Ein leads him into another room where he's tied to a chair and shown a video of his friends talking behind his back for an hour and then h' just screaming make it stop. Ein asks him whose he's friends are and he's like "Nah I'm forever alone" (He didn't actually say that exact line tho)

bUT LIKE-

I'm pretty sure that's not how torture works. I don't know from experience but from my fair share of watching movies where it happens, reading or hearing books about what it happens, and games I'm pretty sure it's not gonna work that quick. More likely how long it takes depends on the person's psyche, self-esteem, emotions, how quick they can trust someone and if they're willing to hold on or not. Sometimes it takes days, weeks or maybe even months or years. It wouldn't take an hour for that. Besides you'd have to use different methods for it too. But book logic I guess.

Then those who were at A-con drive to Garroth's house. Keep in mind Aaron called the police about it and now they take an hour to drive to Garroth's house to decipher morse code instead of giving the phone to the police so they can track Damien's phone's location instead.

NOTE:

Don't go find this book, but if you want to read it Message me and I'll send it to you. But just know I wanna know your thoughts and experience reading it because I left out a few things here but I got the basics of it.

That's it.