Well, I'm posting it. It's over 7000 words, so I'll be splitting it up into short parts. Also, there are a LOT of page breaks--so many that it gets annoying. That's from where my partner had to delete portions that she deemed unnecessary, because, you know, it was supposed to be no longer than eight pages or so, and ours was fourteen AFTER all of the deleting happened.

Warning: This is really, really different from the current version. If you're looking for parallels and similarities, it'll be extremely difficult to find them. I've changed the story so much, which is good, since I'd be using my partner's ideas without permission if I hadn't. Even the characters are different.

And I'm seeing a ridiculous number of parallels with Harry Potter and Frozen in there. Especially Harry Potter, oh my god, in some places it's like I directly copied the books. BUT I SWEAR THAT'S NOT WHAT I WAS TRYING TO DO. IT WAS ALL ACCIDENTAL, I PROMISE, I AM NOT THE SORT OF PERSON TO BLATANTLY PLAGIARIZE SOMEONE.

Edit: When I say directly copied, I don't mean the wording. I mean the scenes and what happens in them. Obviously, I cannot copy the wording and pass that off as an accident. Unless I have the books memorized. Which I don't.

That's one of the reasons I've changed it so much, by the way. The parts "inspired" by Harry Potter are so obvious, it actually makes me want to hit past me in the face with a brick. (Or a refrigerator.) I can't believe my teacher didn't deduct points for that.

That being said, this is directly copy pasted from a document that was last edited in December 2014. I have not changed it at all, though I wish I could.

So, anyway, the next chapter is part one.

If your eyes start bleeding, don't say I didn't warn you.