It's Ink Sans...........................

Here's the old one:

Now now, before we get going, I must do one thing.

Criticize.

This.

Art.

For starters, the nose area is too large. And then he isn't smiling like Sanses usually do. *looks at phalanges* N O P E. Dude, seriously, what happened to them?! They're literally just little round circles of bone...

Another's thing to point out is the MULTIPLE. LIGHT. SOURCES. Dude, I swear those will kill me someday.

Also, the bones in the legs are completely disproportionate, and I missed quite a few details about Ink Sans, including his jacket around the waist.

WHAT'S UP WITH THAT HEAD SHAPE-

The length of the shoes are wrong, as they are different lengths (one being longer than the other), and I used to draw feet huge, like clown feet. This is apparently what happened here. Also, he still has the star in his eye, but he's scared. HOW DID THIS HAPPEN-

The arm bones are just disproportionate, one being larger than the other.....

The hand around the paintbrush is just messed up (B R U H) and the paintbrush doesn't even touch the ground.

Also, what's up with that ink stain???

.............

Anyway, criticizing over with, let's focus.

We will see if I can fix all my mistakes.........

I grab four pens...

And get to work.

Three thousand years later I finish it.

Here's how it turned out:

Now, I screwed up on the leg and the scarf, but over all, I think I did good.

Keep in mind that I did not sketch this out first, and I did it purely out of memory.