Book title: The Blades of Chaos

Writer: Diverse_booklover666

Reviewer: sipstherooibostea

Cover and book title

8/10

8/10 I love the image you used for your cover, it looks cool and I've never seen that image used before. What I wanna add is to consider using darker colours for the heading, subtitle and body text, or consider shading it so that it can draw one's attention better. The book title I also like, I've never seen a similar title and it gives a nice vibe for the book.

Blurb
6/10

6/10 The blurb can use a bit of work. It gives a bit too much away of the story and there are few grammar issues that you will need to fix. Although, the last paragraph of the blurb I like. The questions you put makes the reader interested in what's going to happen. The blurb is also really long, and not a lot of people like that. You can shorten it by cutting out unnecessary information that readers will find out in the book.

Plot
7/10

The general plot of someone who has a sad past, who is different and doesn't want to be, but is the only person that can fulfil an important task is a common one. Although, there are a few things that make your story differ from the cliche. You have fantasy elements, which makes me a bit biased in automatically liking your story more. The fact that you have created your world is admirable, but it also needs a bit more worldbuilding. Like, how do the houses look that Violet and her family lived in look? How do they hide from humans? Where is the Aties located? You don't have to go into massive detail, but the lack of detail you currently have can confuse someone. Your plot has a lot of potentials, and you can use it extremely well. Your first 5 chapters were slow, so I don't know how the plot develops, but I haven't encountered any plotholes and I'm sure you're gonna do well

Grammar and context
5/10

This is your biggest weakness. There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes that need attention. These mistakes happen continuously through your first 5 chapters. What I use for my story is Grammarly. You can use it completely free and it helps with context, grammar and spelling issues.

Creativity
8/10

You have interesting ideas in your book that I like, and you can expand more on them to create a good book. Although, there are times where I think you had a little too much that you wanted to put in and rushed the execution of those ideas.

Overall

Your book was enjoyable, a few plot points didn't quite work, some worked. Cliché at the beginning, but that isn't a negative comment. Your ideas are good, your plot is solid, you just need to fix your grammar and spelling mistakes.