Melted in the mirror by StarsxStories

Cover/title: The cover is very beautiful. It is royal and stylish. The fonts used are great. The color used is also attractive. The cover is really awesome. The title is unique. 

Blurb: The blurb is good as it is. I feel that it is a bit short. Try adding more details to it. 

Grammar and spellings: There are some grammatical mistakes. In many places Audrea Grace with 'g' in small letter. And in one place you have written it as: I remember what mama told me today, she said to smile when I see papa and Audrea because papa was not in a good mood. Although this sentence might sound right. There are some mistakes. When you write ' she said to smile' the smile in the sentence refers to a person. Instead, you can reconstruct your sentence as " My mama advised me to smile every time I saw papa and Audrea......" And in someplace you have mentioned right now, which means it should be in present. Remove the right now, as you have written your work in the past tense. There are a few more, try to edit them.

Plot: Your plot is creative and enjoyable. When I was halfway through your work I felt like reading a Barbie story(movie). I don't know if you had seen the movie, in the Barbie was the real heir of the kingdom. And few days after her birth, the royal family had an accident. And everyone died except the princess. Then a baker finds and raises her, and then due to a lottery, she gets to attend the royal high school of Princess and Royal ladies. And then the story goes on and on. I enjoyed your plot. 

Detail: You have described well. You have detailed all the elements well. 

Style and flow: Your style is cool. Try mentioning when you change point of view. When you changed the view in the 6th chapter, I was a bit confused. Well, I wasn't confused because I know the story crystal clear. 

Enjoyment: I enjoyed a lot reviewing your work. You kept me engaged till midnight. And at that time also I was busy debating with myself if I should sleep or read your work. 

Thank you for asking me to review your work. I hope my review was helpful. Your work is amazing. Keep rocking.  I love your work.