Intro

Chaos Veiled in Harmony was written by ivna_jung. This title secured her the third place position in the "Best Title" category in the Padauk Mini Awards. It was a very well-deserved win, as you can tell based on the title being pretty dang cool. I hope you guys check out ivna's work as she is a dear friend of mine with a lot of potential!

Let's get into the feedback!

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Short Feedback

When I first saw the title, I was intrigued by it and wanted to analyze it more. From a first impressions standpoint, I thought it was interesting due to its usage of emotional words. When I started thinking about it more and breaking it down, I thought it was even cooler. The words "Chaos" and "Harmony" directly contrast one another, yet you intertwine them by using the word "Veiled." All the words connect and make sense for what you're trying to do.

While on the topic of the words connecting, the title flows off the tongue well. I mean, really, try saying it out loud. Chaos Veiled in Harmony will flow off your tongue very easily and well, making it an easy-to-read title that still packs a powerful punch.

And that leads me to my next point: emotion. The emotional side of the title is very strong and leaves an impression on you. It certainly left an impression on me. You use emotional words to give the title more weight and strength, and I think this title is going to stand out when compared to other titles on Wattpad.

I don't recall having any criticisms for this title, so that goes to show how strong it is. Overall, Chaos Veiled in Harmony is an intriguing title that will get the reader excited to click on the book.

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Summary:

- Cool use of emotional words

- Flows off the tongue well

- Leaves a strong impression

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Overall:

Chaos Veiled in Harmony is an interesting title that inspires readers to think and get excited to read the book. It packs a powerful emotional punch that will leave a strong impression on you, so if you're someone who likes emotion, I strongly suggest you go check this book out!

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Thank you for submitting to the Padauk Awards. It was great to have you, and you know I always enjoy speaking with you, so I'm glad I got a chance to look at this, and I have a very detailed review coming for Their Angel when the "Best Fanfic" category for the FN Awards drops, so be on the lookout for that!

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I'm going to start leaving this new note at the end of all reviews since Wattpad removed pms.

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