RECRUDESCENCE
title ::
the word 'recrudescence' is rarely used, so many might not know the meaning of it of the story, to fix this i would put the definition of the word in the
cover ::
i think the graphics are of low quality and that it doesn't really say anything about the book.
description ::
as said in the title part, maybe add a definition of 'recrudescence' to it
prologue / first chapter ::
it starts off smoothly, and has a good mix of dialogue and descriptive text, i just feel like the dialogue between the father and daughter is a bit too formal to be realistic
writing style ::
it flows well and i like that you use the italics for thoughts, which you use a lot
plot and setting ::
the plot is rare, and it’s hard to find a proper outline of the plot, but it is enjoyable to read
characters ::
the characters are unique, but i feel like they should be more 3d, give them compatible and clashing personalities
miscellaneous ::
n/a
overall ::
it’s a good story ! maybe try to improve the characters and how they interact with one another
this is just my opinion ! <3
sorry for being late, life has been chaotic
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