reviewed author: melancholyXennui
book title: Help My Butler Is The Devil!
reviewer: dreaminginreverie

cover + title:
the cover is very simplistic but cute! i love all the colors and how easily it made me want to dive into the book. your name is chopped off though, making it a bit hard to read. i'd also maybe change the name to 'Help! My Butler Is The Devil' ( like p!atd ) instead of what you have now. i do like the title but it feels kind of plain.

description:
how do i even begin with your description? it's literally perfect! it doesn't give too much away but it doesn't give too little either. i absolutely love it! there are a few spelling errors but nothing an editor or you yourself wouldn't be able to fix.

writing style:
i haven't read many jane austen books, but if this what they're all like i think i might start! you could combine a few paragraphs to make them a bit bigger, since i felt like your sentences were a bit choppy but it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of reading.

characters:

anna -
this woman is literally me. i love her! she seems so well put together and maybe her feelings are a little all over the place but that doesn't make me dislike her! if anything, it makes me love her more!

david -
now, this man. . .i don't like him. he seems a bit too demanding and brooding and inconsiderate to his wife. i mean, she comes in disheveled and obviously upset and instead of being a loving husband and trying to help he yanks her all over the room instead.

ezra -
he's very mysterious! i got supernatural vibes when i read about everything he could do. i mean, playing every known instrument? hell, i can't even play piano. i think i'm really going to like this guy.

rara -
i don't know much about him, but he seems like a smart little shit that i'd probably smack if i was in a room too long with him. he seems well developed though, and i really like him!

lucia -
now this woman. . .i don't care for her. she's a bit too chatty and "all knowing" for my taste. she also seems a bit of a rebel, which is totally cool i love rebels, but maybe just a bit too much rebellious-ness for one person.

erin -
ahh, my favorite character and i've only read one chapter with her in it. she's seems like a little shit, like rara, but i really love her. i think i loved her before i even clicked read. just the description did it for me. she's awesome!

grammar:
there were multiple spelling errors, but they can easily be fixed by an editor or yourself if you have the time. some sentences also seemed a bit choppy with words, i felt they didn't fit with the sentence. you could also dial back on the stuttering from anna. some is fine, but she does it so much it made me think she had a speech disorder. if she does, then that needs to be mentioned so readers know.

overall thoughts:
i honestly didn't know how much i'd like this book, but then i read the description and just. . .fell in love with it! i'm glad i was able to review it and i'm super excited to continue! i believe this book has major potential with the wonderful plot is has!