Title: The Aftermath
Author: @LynaForge
Reviewer: CatLoverHope
Chapters read: Eight
Review:
   Let's begin with what the readers see first. The title is very simple and intriguing, I like it a lot, It also matches with the story. The cover is also good, it describes the fantasy element. Something more mysterious could also do. The blurb is good, but it gets a tad bit boring. I would recommend adding more glimpses of the undeads' struggles, in a way that the reader feels at least sympathy. The description of the plot though, is perfect.

Now let's look at the content of the story. I think the first paragraph of the first chapter was really good, it got me hooked. I can't say the same for the rest of the chapters though. I would recommend the author to try to write it in the way it was written in the first chapter. The paragraph arrangement is perfect! The grammar is also very good, though I would've liked it if there were more of a vast vocabulary. I think figures of speech and caution of where to use active and passive voice would help a lot in the writing style.
Also, I think the chapters seem to drag on a lot; I'm not suggesting that the author shortens them, though I would definitely appreciate it if there were more of a drama/thriller aspect in the book. It would be better if the author had left small hints of what the story is going to eventually lead to. I really love the way the author leaves short hints of the main character's feeling and emotions which are easy to pick up, it gets me giddy for no reason. I would also appreciate it if the side-characters were also slightly similarly described, it would be fun to read. I also think the author should make it clear by expressing their writing style more extravagantly, how this story is different, or even similar to others.
I honestly think this story has a lot of potential, if the author were to make the baseline of the plot clearer.