Title: Toxic
Author: @Furashu
Reviewer
Review:

Okay, so I'm really impressed by this story. I think the cover is perfect, and the title is too. The blurb/summary could be written better. I think if the author doesn't mention the drugs part or the relationship-going-wrong part, it would be way more interesting.

Now, the content of the book. I think the way the author has arranged the paragraphs was pretty much perfect, but the way you've written the moments like the 'I love you' and stuff, the description or feeling of the main character was just too dragged on. The author could've written it in a much more dramatic or suspenseful way.

I also think the dialogues are somewhat boring, but only a little. The author could try arranging them better for the, again, dramatic or suspenseful effect. The grammar is perfect, and I would expect myself to read more of this book when it's updated; I was never interested in heterosexual romance stories, so kudos to the author.

I think it would be even more amazing if you added cliffhangers, because I think readers would get hooked easily. I also think you could portray the main character's reaction to the male leads's suspiciousness better. Make her question ,things in her mind and openly too; show how she suddenly became rude/toxic *wiggles brows* with his influence.

Overall and very honestly, this story has potential to have a million reads. The author just needs to develop their writing a little bit, and that comes with time and practice. Until then, good luck, and don't give up or I'll personally hunt you down, @Furashu.