Title: Phantasmic Tales
Genre: One Shot
Author: Aethereal_Psyche
Judge: SaachiDudani
Cover/Title: The cover as well as the title are good. I really like the uniqueness in both of them but for a matter of fact, I am not pleased with the change of fonts that is happening in the cover and the title is new but there are better ones out there. Hence, it would be a 1.2/2 for me.
Description: I've absolutely no idea of what is happening in the description because I don't understand those words and maybe they are not even words, they are spelling errors. Try to keep your description as relatable, as curious and most importantly as simple as you can. It would be a 0.2/1 for me.
Storyline: The story, however, is amazing. I really like how there is enough spacing and how you have written those stories. I actually didn't find a lot of grammatical or spelling errors in the story, they made me curious. Also, I really want to appreciate you for using those words in your story. To think of a story with the words given is very difficult and you wrote those stories so I really appreciate your effort. It would be a 1.8/2 for me.
Total: 3.2/5
Book star: 3
Wish you luck, love and peace.
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