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Good morning bhavya…Gauri says coming out of the room in the noon.
Good morning bhabhi. Aapki tabeyet toh theek hai na?? Bhavya asks her ( Are you all-right bhabhi?)
Haan bhavya hum toh bilkul theek hain..bhala tum kyun aise pooch rahi ho?? Gauri asks confused ( Yes bhavya I am fine but why are you suddenly asking me about my health?)
Wo bhabhi 2 baj rahe hain aur aap abhi kamre se nikli hain toh hume laga ki shayad aapki tabiyet na kharab ho….Bhavya says making gauri blush a little ( Actually, it’s 2 in the afternoon and you’ve just come out of your room…thus the question)
Wo actually omkaraji ko zara sa bukhaar thaaa isiliye hume deri ho gyi…Gauri says masking her red face ( Omkaraji had a little fever so I was looking after him..)
Hello ladies…. Omkara says from behind making gauri’s eyes bulge out
Bhaiyaa aap kyun aaye bahar?? Rest kijiye na jaakar. Bhabhi keh rahi thi aapko fever tha…. Bhavya says concerned ( Bhaiyaa why did you come out?? Please go and rest, bhabhi just told me about your fever)
Gauri is sweating thinking what if omkara blurts out against her excuse… She tries to gesture him but poor ri gets hidden behind bhavya due to her short stature..
Here omkara is confused hearing bhavya talk about him having fever, looking a little sideways, he sees his chirraiya drenched in sweat due to panic…Understanding his chirriaya made that excuse he says… Haan bhavya thoda sa bukhaar tha par gauri ne khayal rakha tha..Ab main theek hoon… ( Yes bhavya I did have fever but I feel fine now thanks to gauri)
Listening to omkara…Gauri is a little relieved
Acha yeh btaao tum kya kar rahi ho bhavya…Gauri asks in an attempt to change the topic ( Okay, tell me what are you doing bhavya?)
Zaada kuch nhn bhabhi! Aapke ladle devar ko na aaloo poori khaane ka mann tha wo bhi aapke haathon ki.. Toh hum bas wahi bnaane ki koshish kar rahe the… Bhavya says irriated by her failed attempt at making what rudy has asked for ( Nothing much bhabhi! Your beloved Brother in law wants to relish some aaloo poori made by you so I’m just trying my hand at it)
Laao do hume, ab hum kar lenge! Tum jaao aur jaake rudy bhaiya ko bulaa lao aur table set kardo…Gauri tells her ( Give it to me, I will do it from here.. ! You go and call rudy bhaiya..also set the table)
Theek hai bhabhi! Hum aate hain abhi.. Bhavya says and leaves the kitchen leaving omkara and gauri ( okay bhabi! I will be right back)
While gauri gets to make aaloo poori, omkara back hugs her and huskily whispers Rudy ka mann tumahre haathon se bani aaloo poori khaane ka aur uske bhai ka mann tumhe khaane ka kar raha hai .. ( Rudy wants to eat aaloo poori made by you but his brother wants to eat you)
O..om..Karaji! Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap. Kitchen hai yeh Gauri says blushing ( Omkaraji what are you upto?? This is the kitchen)
Haan O yeh na kitchen hai aur yahan koi bhi aa jaa sakta hai! Aisa uncensored scene dekh ke meri aankhon pe kya beetegi zara toh sochte aap O…Rudy says dramtically ( Yes O this is the kitchen and everyone has a free pass for it! You should have atleast thought about my innocent eyes before putting up such an uncensored show)
Shut up rudra…Om says getting away from gauri while gauri is thoroughly embarrassed
Bhabhi aaloo poori taiyaar hai kya?? Bhavya asks changing the topic…. ( Bhabhi is the food ready??)
Haan aap log chaliye! Main laayi gauri says and gets back to making it ( yes, you guys settle down I will bring it)
Soon, the food is served and rikara along with ruvya relish it amidst the banter…
Gauri hume aaj shaam ko nikalna hai toh apne saare documents le lo tum…Om reminds gauri once they are done with their meal. ( Gauri we have to start back in the evening so make sure you pack your documents..)
Ji ji! Hume yaad hai. Aap baaki ki packing dekh lijiye hum kitchen saaf kar dete hain Gauri tells him ( Yes yes I remember… You just pack the rest of the things meanwhile I will clean the kitchen)
Packing everything, they all gather in the hall for their evening tea.. Waise omkaraji hum soch rahe the ki ab toh rudy bhaiyaa bhi settled hain apni naukri main toh kyun bhavya aur rudy bhaiyaa ki shaadi ki baat kar li jaaye.. Gauri says lightning up rudra’s face ( Omkaraji, now that rudy bhaiya is settled in his new job should we just proceed with ruvya’s marriage?)
Sachi bhabhi! Aap na sabse best ho. Sabse zaada mujhe bas aap he samjhti hain rudra says happily ( Really bhabhi!! You’re the best.. You understand me more than anyone else)
Bhabhi!! Kal rudra bhi yehi keh rahe the…Bhavya says and earns an awww from rikara ( Bhabhi! Rudra was saying the same last night..)
Lagta hai yahan kisi ko shaadi ki bahut jaldi hai..Om begibs to tease rudra when his phone rings… ( Looks like someone is very eager for marriage)
Seeing the caller id, a smile breaks out on om’s face… Seeing om’s smile gauri instantly knows who the caller is…
Kya keh rahi hain maa…Gauri asks omkara making the three of them surprised ( What is maa saying)
Putting the phone on speaker, gauri talks to jhanvi about how they were just discussing about rudra and bhavya’s marriage…
Jhanvi gets emotional listening about her younger son’s marriage.. Kitne sapne the mere rudra ki shaadi ko leke… She says in tears ( I had so many dreams for his marriage)
Maa! Aapke saare sapne poore honge..Oberoi mansion main nhn toh vara main poore honge aapke sapne…Aapke bête ka ghar bhi toh aapka he na maa gauri says consoling jhanvi while omkara looks at her proudly ( Maa!! All your dreams will come true…We will fulfill them in vara if not in oberoi mansion…Your son’s house is also yours maa)
Gauri beta!! Thank you mere om ki zindagi main aane ke liye…Jhanvi expresses her gratitude ( Gauri my child! Thank you for coming in my om’s life)
Understanding her MIL’s unsaid emotions gauri reciprocates lovingly and then says maa aap na pandit ji se mahoorat nikalwaa lijiye aur fer vara main aane ki tayirriyan kijiye… ( Maa, please get the auspicious date from the priest and come to vara..)
Haan! Main kal he shaam ko bulaati hoon pandit ji ko.. Jhanvi says and then hangs up after a few more minutes after wishing them a safe journey ( Yes…I will call him tomorrow)
Getting up quickly, they all head towards their car and settle down..
Gauri zara apne certificates toh dikhaao..Ek baar check kar lete hain Omkara asks gauri ( Gauri just show me your certificates…Let’s just check them through)
Gauri yeh kiske certificates utha laayi ho yaar tum…Om asks her while ruffling through the papers ( Gauri whose certificates have you brought)
Kya bol rahe hain aap omkaraji?? Yeh humara ghar hai toh yahan par certificates bhi humare he honge na… Gauri states the obvious while settling down besides bhavya ( What are you saying omkaraji?? This is my house so the certificates that we took from here will be mine)
Par inme toh date of birth main 23rd august 1997 likha hai…Om says shocked ( But it states 23rd august 1997 as the date of birth)
Kyunki wahi humara janamdin hai….Gauri tells him shocking the guts out of him ( Because that is my Birthday)
Kya??? The three of them except gauri exclaim loudly…Two in shock and one in surprise ( What??)
Matlab ki ab main sabse chota nhn hoon…rudra says happily ( That means I am not the youngest anymore)
Haan rudra bhaiya tabhi toh hum aapko bhaiya kehte hain..gauri tells him ( Yes rudra bhaiya…This is why I address you as bhaiyaa)
Bhabhi matlab aap sirf 21 saal ki hain?? Bhavya says shocked( Bhabhi that means you are only 21??)
Gauri iska matlab hai ki tum mujhse 9 saal choti ho…Matlab ki main tumse 9 saal bada hoon..Matlab ki hum dono main 9 saal ka farq hai..matlab ki …Omkara trails ( Gauri this means you are 9 years younger than me…This means I am 9 years older than you…this means we have a 9 year agr gap between us..)
Yeh kya matlab ki matlab ki laga rakha hai omkaraji aapne…Hum jaante hain ki aap humse 9 saal bade hain…Par isse koi farq nhn padhta hai… Gauri says putting the end to omkara’s words ( Why are you going on with this means…I know what it means… But this doesn’t change anything between us.. Do you understand??)
Shocked by his wife’s date of birth, om ignites the car and speeds it up.. The journey is full of awful silence.. Unable to understand the state of her husband’s mind gauri tries her best to get him to talk but to no avail! Omkara maintains a stoical face throughout.
Soon enough they reach their home… Quickly deboarding, rudra and bhavya take in the luggage with omkara and gauri strolling behind them. Gauri tries to hold om’s hand but he subconsciously jerks it away and walks in leaving her alone.. Hurt with his gesture she wipes out the lone tear that escapes her eye and walks in..
Reaching her room, gauri hears the water sound from washroom, so she gets to arrange the cupboard… Opening the bathroom door, omkara walks out with a towel around his neck and without a word picks up his clothes from his side..
Gauri takes her turn for the shower and coming out she is shocked to find om sleeping.. settling down on the bed, she leans her head on the headboard and closing her eyes
Gauri’s POV
Kya hogya hai aapko omkaraji??  Aage toh aap kabhi humse yun bina baat kiye nhn soye toh aaj kyun?? Kyun aap hume ignore kar rahe hain?? Kya galti hui hai humse?? ( What has happened to you omkaraji?? You’ve never slept without talking to me then why today?? Why have you been ignoring me today?? What have I done???)
Sleep takes over her…
Morning rays seep in, omkara rubs in eyes feeling the rays hit him… Lazily waking up he finds gauri sleeping while sitting.. Making her lie down properly, he places a quick kiss on her forehead feeling which gauri smiles in her sleep. Omkara smiles a little seeing his chirraiya feel him even when asleep and goes to freshen up.
Omkara after his bath leaves for his gallery while the other three are still asleep thanks to the long trip they made..Gauri wakes up squirming… Feeling the loss of warmth she is used to wake upto her eyes snap open and looking at the bedside watch she sighs..
Freshening up she leaves the room, heading to the kitchen she makes some light breakfast and prepped for the lunch.. picking up the phone, she dials jhanvi..!
Excitedly keeping back the receiver after talking to her mother in law, gauri makes lunch for which bhavya and rudra join in.
Clock strikes 3 and omkara opens the door… Taking some water for him like their usual routine, gauri takes his bag and asking him to freshen up sets the table for their lunch.
Settling down on the table, Gauri says…Maa se baat hui thi humaari! ( I had a word with maa)
Kya kaha mom ne bhabhi?? Shaadi ka mahurat nikal gya kya?? Rudra asks impatiently making bhavya blush while rikara laugh at his curiosity ( What did mom say?? Did she talk to the priest?)
Haan rudra bhaiya!! Mahurat aaj se 2 mahine baad ka nikla hai… Gauri tells them all ( Yes rudra bhaiya..! The date is after 2 months)
Om smiles seeing rudra so excited….but his smile vanishes when gauri talks about having their family around for the festivities…
Koi zaroorat nhn hai kisiko bulaane ki..Bas mom, dad aur daadi he aayenge..! Baaki kisi ko kuch kehne ki zaroorat nhn hai… Om declares making gauri shocked ( No need to call anyone! Only mom, dad and grandma will come.. You don’t have to inform anyone else)
Haaan bhabhi! Main nhn chahta ki koi aur aaye meri shaadi main…Jinn logon ko mere bhai aur bhabhi se problem unka meri life aur khushiyon se koi waasta nhn hai…Rudra expresses ( Yes bhabhi! I don’t want anyone else besides mom, dad and grandma.. The people who don’t wish good for my brother and sister in law aren’t need in my life and in my happiness)
Par bhavya ko toh…Gauri begins to say ( But bhavya might)
Nhn bhabhi!! Aap soch bhi kaise sakti hain ki hume unn logon ki zaroorat hogi jinhone aapki shaadi todne ki koshish ki ho…Hum bhi om bhaiya aur rudra ki baat se sehmat hain.. bhavya says comforting gauri ( No bhabhi!! How can you even think that I would like to have people who tried to break your marriage.. I agree with om bhaiyaa and rudra)
Om affectionately smiles at bhavya while rudra looks at her proudly…
Soon lunch is over, and ruvya go out for some shopping. Om goes to his room to rest. Gauri follows him too trying to talk to him…
Gauri please mujhe thode der akela chod do… Om requests her ( gauri please leave me alone for sometime)
Nhn! Hum nhn chodenge… Hum kal se dekh rahe hain ki aap hume ignore kar rahe hain..Hume janna hai ki aakhir humne aisa kya kiya hai jo aap aise bartaav kar rahe hain humaare saath….Gauri confronts him and holds his hand (No I won’t. you have been ignoring me since yesterday…I want to know the reason… What have I done to make you behave like this??)
Gauri yaar please… omkara says and jerks his hand away
Omkaraji! Kya aap humse pyaar nhn karte?? Kya hum aap par bhoj hain?? Gauri asks him crying while omkara is shocked at his wife’s brain ( Omkaraji do you not love me?? Am I burden on you??)
Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum gauri?? Omkara asks her cupping her face and kissing away her tears.. ( what nonsense are you saying gauri??)
Fer kyun ignore kar rahe hain aap hume?? Pta hai aapko kitna darr gye the hum aapko aise dekh ke….Gauri says hiccupping ( Then why are you ignoring me?? Do you have any idea how scared I was seeing you behave like this…)
Gauri kahan se aate hain tumahre deemaag main aise idea?? Btao mujhe…Tumne kaise maan liya ki main tumse pyaar nhn karta?? Kya tumhe mujhpe bilkul bharosa nhn hai omkara asks her hugging her ( Gauri from where do you get such ideas?? Tell me.. How did you even think that I don’t love you? Do you not trust me??)
Khud se zaada bharosa hai aap par, bas hum darr gye the. Aap sabse baat kar rahe the par humse nhn isiliye aise khayaal aa rahe the hume..gauri confesses still hugging him ( I trust you more than myself… I was just scared. You were talking to everyone but me so I was getting usch scary thoughts)
Omkaraji! Kya aapko humaari umar se problem hai?? Gauri asks him truthfully ( Omkaraji!! Are you troubled because of my age..)
Gauri…wo Omkara begins to say when gauri puts a finger on his lip making him quiet..
Taking him towards the bed, she makes him sit and takes her place on his lap… circling her arms around his neck she says omkaraji! Humare beech 9 saal ka gap bhale he hai magar usse humara pyaar nhn badlega..hum pehle bhi aapse utna he pyaar karte the aur ab bhi utna he karte hain…Shayad parson raat ke baad aur bhi zaada karne lage hain… ( Omkaraji! I agree we have a 9 year age gap but that doesn’t change our love…I loved you unconditionally before and even now my love is the same… May be it has increased a bit more after that night)
Gauri… Mujhe na tumahri umar ke baare main jaankar bahut jhatka laga…Bahut guilty feel kar raha tha main yeh sochkar ki tum bahut choti ho shaadi ke relation ke liye.. omkara confesses ( Gauri…I was shocked knowing your age, also I was guilty thinking about our marriage and its responsibilities on you in such a small age)
Omkaraji! Humare liye humari shaadi aur aap bahut khaas hain.. Iska humari umar se koi lena dena nhn hai.! Hum apne poore mann se aapke hona chahte the… aap please guilty mat feel kijiye… humse nhn dekha jaata aapko aise…She says cupping his face ( Omkaraji! Our marriage and you are sacred for me and trust me this isn’t related to my age. I have solefully wanted to be yours so please don’t be guilty…I can’t stand to see you like this)
Omkara smiles realizing how skillfully gauri has managed to make him feel guilty free…. Gauri please mujhe maaf kardo. Main tumse pyaar karne ke baawajood tumahre umar tak nhn jaanta tha… He says apologetically ( Gauri please forgive me…despite loving you I had no idea about your age)
Acha hai nhn jaante the…agar jaante hote toh hume uss raat apna nhn hone dete…Gauri says while playing with his shirt buttons.. ( Glad you didn’t know…You wouldn’t have let me be yours had you known this fact)
Koi bahut he zaada khul raha hai…Om says teasing her ( Somebody is opening up too much)
Gauri shyly smiles and hides her face in the crook of his neck.. Agar hum aise nhn honge toh aap toh guilt main he reh jaayenge…She whispers ( You will forever be in guilt if I don’t open up)
And the room fills in with their laughter…

guys....finally....hogya...phew...sorry fr making u wait soo long...almost 4 months(maybe more).....exam ke beech update de rahi hoon...so ill stop if i dont get good responce...

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