• Mystery Results Part 2 •
These are the results for part 2 of Mystery and we have our judge Secretadmirer235 to thank for helping us!
And we have two runner ups !!!!
Princess Dreams by LORAINEJD
Cover: 5
Title and Blurb: 6
Plot: 7
Protagonist: 3
Antagonist: 3
Supporting Character: 3
Anticipation: 4
Plot Development: 7
Enjoyment: 7
Grammar/ punctuation: 7
Follow: -10 (You didn't follow your judge!)
Rules: 10
Total: 62/100
Review:
The plot is good, I enjoyed reading.
The cover can be made a little better, make it relatable to the theme of the book and the story scale, try not to put more than 2 POV's in a chapter if it's short. Plus try introducing the characters.
Otherwise I liked it.
Happy writing!
For 3rd Place
We have... (druummmrolll)
The Stolen Chocolate by EttilaSharif
Cover: 6
Title and Blurb: 6
Plot: 6
Protagonist: 3
Antagonist: 3
Supporting Character: 3
Anticipation: 4
Plot Development: 7
Enjoyment: 7
Grammar/ punctuation: 7
Follow: -10 (You did not follow your judge!)
Rules: 10
Total: 62/100
Review:
Nice Cover
Brilliant Start.
The story narrating style is Crisp and Clean.
I wish you a very successful writing journey ahead.
For 2nd Place
We have... (Drumroll)
Searching for Chi by CassandraHW
Cover: 6
Title and Blurb: 6
Plot: 7
Protagonist: 4
Antagonist: 3
Supporting Character: 3
Anticipation: 4
Plot Development: 8
Enjoyment: 8
Grammar/ punctuation: 7
Follow: -10 (You did not follow your judge!)
Rules: 10
Total: 66/100
Review:
The story is good. Characters are well developed. Justifies your decision (Placing the book in the right category). Try making the POV's more prominent. Definitely a good read.
For 1st Place
We have... (Drumroll please)
Lost by OutgoingLoner_7
Cover: 6
Title and Blurb: 5
Plot: 6
Protagonist: 3
Antagonist: 3
Supporting Character: 2
Anticipation: 3
Plot Development: 6
Enjoyment: 6
Grammar/ punctuation: 7
Follow: 10
Rules: 10
Total: 67/100
Review:
The composition of the book is really good, Nice Cover.
The plot can be developed a bit, it's maybe because there are more stories with the same theme. I had a good time reading the book.
So we have come to the end of MYSTERY round! Congratulations to all our judges and participants for making it this far with us! There are a fee more rounds coming for the other genres so stay tuned my dears!
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With love,
The Savant Girls 🔍
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