Anusara12's entry:

8/10 - Neatness
The writing isn't placed well, which lowers the quality - for example writing Liam over that word, which I can only guess what is, considering I can't read it.

7/10 - Spelling & Fonts
The writing isn't placed well. Plus, the spelling of no one is debatable, but I've always known it to be no one, not noone. 

19/20 - Creativity
Pretty creative.

7/10 - Colour Scheme
The colour scheme isn't blended well. 

9/10 - Originality

19.9/20 - Face Claim

15/15 - Genre
This isn't being judged in this contest.

9/10 - Imagination

15/15 - Maturity
This isn't being judged in this contest.

Total: 108.9/120

Sorry I'm not leaving many comments - I'm really busy so I'm trying to get the judging done quickly.