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REVENGE
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Author :: aesTAEtic_Tigress

Reviewer :: kimvante_

First impression :: 18/20

The cover was quite impressive. It showcased the dark vibe of the book and Jungkook's half covered face portrayed his character very well. The title is pertinent to the story. The book revolves around the concept of revenge so you did a good job at keeping the title simple yet relatable. I must say, the synopsis was intriguing. Though it contained not many facts, I like how you didn't describe anything relating to Taehyung and instead asked the readers to find out about him in the story.

Beginning of a new start :: 4/10

Okay so in the starting chapters I felt quite bored because the story build up was very much predictable and nothing new. But I can detect that you did add efforts into constructing the first few chapters. I'm hoping to see more development in the chapters ahead.

Concept & Plot :: 15/25

The concept of the story was not new. I've read quite similar revenge based stories so the concept of your story was very common. About the plot, I have the same feelings too but I read the further chapters and I located a mystery hidden somewhere that is yet to unravel. So I think and hope that your plot turns out to be something unique rather than something cliché.

Characters & Emotions :: 5/15

The characters of your story were very plain and you didn't even describe them properly. They had the same cliché personalities that we see in almost every cliché BTS mafia fic. There was absolutely zero characters build up or development in general. About emotions, I could only detect emotions in a few places and those emotions were also not very well displayed. I hope you work on your character build up skills and learn how to enhance the emotions of a character given their particular state.

Tone & Style - 4/10

Your way of describing the story was very unappealing. It was just as if you didn't care and wrote whatever in order to fill up the chapters. You couldn't even describe the clothing of a character without having to put up a picture which was absolutely very unattractive. When you read an actual novel, do you see any images attached to it? Because it's a story book, not a picture book. Your writing style was common just like how it is with other books. The paragraphs weren't too short nor too long which is good. The narration was indistinguishable at some points.

Grammar - 8/20

A story is only appealing to read when the grammar is perfect or at least readable. Your grammar was off at many points. It disrupted the flow of the story a lot. There were no rich or complex words detected, only plain English. There was no descriptive writing and even if there was, it was very obscure. The absence of colons and semi-colons was detected in a few areas.

Tip :: Please try reading as many books as you can and by books I mean actual ones, not fanfictions. It may help in educating you like writing. Also, please proofread your chapters and edit them properly before publishing because your story looks very carelessly written::

TOTAL :: 54/100