Author : vintagelara

Reviewer : chemicalkrackel

FORELSKET

COVER : 7/10

Honestly speaking the cover is good it's appealing to eyes at the same time bringing up the nostalgia of the vintage aesthetics but the only thing twinging me is the fonts and filters, you can easily apply more variations to the filter using applications like PicsArt and Phonto is a great help when it comes to fonts, but it's attractive enough to grab the attention of readers.

TITLE : 10/10

I love the name, the term you have used for the mutual sighting of euphoria it Sparks a lot of interest, it makes the reader curious about the story and it successfully did to pull my nerve strings.

SYNOPSIS : 8/10

The idea is common of a cold CEO and the secretary but I like the gender-bend here where a strong woman attains a high position and a young yet troubled man is hired as a secretary, the plot is simple, not too stretched, the troubles and struggles with words and feels it's well-intended but I feel the author should refer to thesaurus so that new words can be molded and you don't feel bored.

PLOT : 24/30

I like the idea of it, the root but at the same time a good execution was anticipated, as I said the author should come up with new words and phrases to attract the views and spark curiosity, they might be simple yet fascinating.

CHARACTER : 8/10

The character root describes the time in the modern world, where a powerful woman stands tall with all her fears carved inside, and yet there is a sheepish young youth looking for a job in a big city where employment isn't a game of kids, the reasons are nothing one can doubt, the imperfections of the second leads makes it more interesting at the same time you want to embrace the story but at the same time those little plot holes and execution irritate you.

GRAMMAR : 15/20

I can't lie the story is good for a light read but the grammatical errors disturb you, still, I can't judge over these criteria without knowing the first language of the writer so I recommend her to hire an editor that would make her work easier if language becomes a barrier.

WRITING STYLE : 7/10

The writing style is lengthy, it drags on there are many places where you find things unnecessary and you have to bear with them if you want to know what's ahead but sometimes the lengthy writing makes a story unwanted in the eyes of the reader when you are writing a novel you have to keep in mind that what the generation and people want and this time people usually don't harbor time that is why the length should better be medium.
The story has a slow pace where everything is in detail and that's not necessary sometimes, we know some really obvious things so it's better to cut them.

OVERALL

The only problem is the execution, it should be planned and you should know what you are writing you can't go off the track while talking about important topics, excluding the grammar, the book is really one good read but a lot can't be said with only a few chapters published but the author has a great potential to deliver something epic.

Review Score : 79/100

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