Author: taeastethic

Reviewer: wuwtaetae

Love In The War: Kim Taehyung Fanfiction

Cover: 6/10

Well, it didn't suit the story. the picture definitely doesn't bring in the war element of the story. it belongs to a mafia or vampire type of book. Also, the cover was very basic, could be better.

Title: 3/5

I feel like it gives out too much, it totally reveals the whole plot and it misses the mystery element. It fits the book tho.

Synopsis: 7/10

I really liked the synopsis but it gives out too much. if I were a reader and came across this, I'd be able to guess the plot immediately and we do not want that. we want the readers to be enticed as well as enough by the summary that they click read immediately and only the mystery element in summaries brings that.

Plot: 20/30

It was too predictable. It wasn't exactly original, I've read poems with the same plot from centuries ago, you know. protagonist 1 meets protagonist 2, they fall in love, the protagonist has to go to the war, and they might die while the other protagonist sits here worrying. I've read them before, seriously.

Characters: 7/10

Well, I think they made sense in most of the scenes but in some, they didn't. I couldn't get taehyung's character at all as it was in y/n's point of view. They could've been more thought out I guess.

Grammar: 15/20

I found a lot of grammatical errors, I hope you correct them. these errors were minor but they tend to distract readers a lot so please correct them.

Writing style: 6/10

It wasn't consistent. The characters talk in the same way as they think and that can get confusing at times. you try to show their actions in their dialogues when you could just add them in the already existing paras below. sometimes the dialogues are with names and colons, sometimes they aren't. It's just confusing and inconsistent.

Overall:

Well, it's okay to make mistakes, we learn from them. I'm sure you will too so don't get upset and keep trying!

Review Scores: 64/100

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