This is my first short story on shivi based on the recent kangan track.... I so want the makers to show similar to like this.... Bt I m sure they will show completely different one.... So maan ki sukoon ke liye likh diya 😅😉😉

N ya I will continue this till raavi birthday , as someone suggested me to

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Raavi pov...

I couldn't believe what I heard!!!!!!

Shiva - agar mein ajj bina kangan ke gaya toh raavi bhi mere saath nahi jayegi!!!!

Was Shiva really serious??? Was he really gonna leave me for that kangan???

I knew the kangan was really important for him... Bt is the kangan more important than his wife?? Forget about his wife!!! Is the kangan more important than a human????

I was broken..... I was hurt.... My own masi maa the woman who love me so much was fighting with my husband.... N my husband who has nothing bt hatred  for me was giving her warning that he will leave her daughter!!!!!!

Kya mujhe chodna itna asan hai????🥺

I was busy on my thoughts when I heard both of them shouting...

Prafulla - tu sach mein is kangan ke liye meri beti ko chod dega?? (Shock)

Shiva - iss kangan ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.... Kuch bhi!!!! (Angrily glaring at masi)

Raavi- mujhe maar bhi sakta hai!!!!! (Broken voice)

All look at me ......

Dhara - yeh kya bol rahi hai raavi?? (Shock)

Raavi- nahi dhara di..... Ajj toh faisla kar hi lete hai.... Bata Shiva iss kangan ke liye maar dega mujhe!!!! (Shouting)

He look at me shockingly!!!!

Raavi- itna shock kyu ho raha hai??? Mujhse chutkara toh chahiye na.... Toh puri taara se chutkara le na..... Chod ne se better hai maar hi do , atleast meri shakal dekhni toh nahi milegi!!! (Angrily shouting)

Prafulla- a raavi kya bol rahi hai??? (Shock)

Raavi- masi app toh rehne hi do.... App bhi toh yahi chahti hai na!!!! (Angrily)

Prafulla - yeh tu kya bol rahi hai!!!

Masi try to come near me bt I show her my hand

Raavi- ha masi thik bol rahi hoon mein.... !!!!

I couldn't say anything as I was already crying.... Dhara di came near me and hold me..

Dhara- bass raavi.. Maat ro , hum ghar jakar baat karenge!!! (Consoling)

Raavi- kon sa ghar??..... Mera koyi ghar nahi hai!!! (Broken)

Gautam - raavi abhi tu thik nahi hai chal ghar!!!

Raavi- nahi gombi mera koyi ghar nahi hai..... (Then I look at Shiva) aur jo ghar tha na woh bhi nahi raha.... Abb mein waha jakar kya karungi!!! (Crying)

Suman - asa kyu bol rahi hai raavi beta.... Hum sab hai na!!! (Sadly)

Raavi- nahi maa.... Mein thak gayi hoon humesha masi aur Shiva ke bich piste huwa (crying)... Humesha sirf ladaee karte hai.... Ek dusre ko kitna kuch sunate hai..... Kabhi yeh nahi sochte ki raavi ko kaisa lagta hai..... Sirf kud ki hi fikar hai un dono ko...meri toh feeling hi nahi hai!!!!

Prafulla- nahi raavi asa nahi hai!!! (Guilty)

Raavi- asa hi hai masi maa..... Agar abb ki side se kuch bolu toh Shiva ko lagta hai mein apki side hoon aur agar Shiva ki taraf se kuch bolu toh apko lagta hai mein uski side le rahi hoon.... Toh akir mein karu toh kya karu!!! (Crying)

Dhara - raavi....

Raavi- nahi dhara di ajj please mujhe maat rokiye.... Mein thak gayi hoon... Mujhse abb aur bardaasht nahi hota....!!!! (Broken down)

I kneel down n started crying..... Masi maa and Anita di try to come bt I stop them.... Dhara di n gombi hold me...

Raavi- (hugging her)dhara di kya mujhe choda itna aasan hai ki Sab mujhe chod dete hai..... App ne kaha tha na ki mujhe meri khushiyaan milegi.... Toh phir kyu abhi thak nahi mile!!!! Kya mein khushi deserve nahi karti (crying ) ....

Dhara - tujhe teri khushiyaan zaroor milegi!!!! (Consoling)

Raavi- kab milega??? Aur kon dega??? Woh jo ek kangan ke liye mujhe chodne ko bhi ready hai???

I look at Shiva..... He put his head down !!!

Raavi- abb toh mujhe meri khushi kabhi nahi milegi ..... Mein khushi deserve hi nahi karti....!!!! (Crying)

I stood up n look at everyone!!!! I straight away went to Shiva and masi...

Raavi- mein koyi khilona nahi hoon ki app dono khelo..... Mujhe na apki zaroorat hai (looking at masi) aur na hi teri (looking at Shiva) .... Itni hi problem hai na tujhe toh phir thik hai chali jaati hoon (angrily) par apke pass nahi aaungi masi

Shiva for the first time look at me!!!

Gautam- yeh kya bol rahi hai raavi?? (Tens)

Raavi- nahi gombi bohot problem ho rahi hai na in dono ko..... Meri wajah se ek dusre ko bardaasht kar rahe hai.... Toh phir thik hai jab wajah hi nahi rehegi toh bardaasht nahi karna parega!!!!

I run from there..... I heard all calling my name bt I didn't want to stay there any longer!!!

Raavi pov end

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Dhara - app toh khush ho gaye na app dono.!!!! Shanti mil gayi ya phir kuch aur bhi karna hai (Angrily) ...... Aur tu Shiva tune soch bhi kaise liye ki tu raavi ko chodega.....!!!!! (Angrily hitting him)

Gautam- dhara samal kud ko..... Abhi Shiva ko chod aur raavi ko dekh..... Chal humein uske saath  rehna hai!!! (Consoling)

Prafulla- mein bhi Chalti hoon !!! (Tens)

Dhara - nahi mami.... Apne already meri bachi ko kaafi hurt kiya hai.... Mein nahi chahti ki woh apko dekhkar aur hurt ho jaye!!!! (Sternly)

Then dhara n gautam run after raavi !!!

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov....

I just couldn't believe what I heard right now!!! Raavi was very hurt by my words..... The words which I never mean!!!! I just told mami that because  I knew mami loves raavi alot so I was sure she will return the kangan..... I never thought that it will lead to this....

Raavi tears were effecting me..... I couldn't bear the fact that she was crying only because of me... When did our relationship progress so much that my words effected her and her tears effected me????

I hurt raavi badly...

Suman - shanti mil gayi na tum dono ko!!!!! Khush ho gaye na uss bachi ko rula kar??? Na abhi thak maan bara nahi??? (Angrily).... Prafulla woh teri beti hai, apni beti ke baare mein ek baar bhi nahi socha tune ki usse kaisa lagega ya phir usse dard pochega!!!! Par tujhe kya bolu jab mera beta hi usse chot pocha raha hai (ashamed)..... Aur ha Shiva tujhe kya laga ki agar yeh kangan nahi degi toh hum raavi ko jaane denge, kabhi nahi woh pandya parivaar ki bahu hai usse hum kahi nahi jaane dete.... Mere liye meri bahu iss kangan se bhi zyada kimti hai.... Agar iss kangan ki wajah se raavi ke aakhon mein asu hai toh nahi chahiye mujhe ase kangan!!!!

I look at everyone guilty..... I have really hurt everyone.... N specially raavi!!!!

I couldn't help bt cry silently!!!!!

Shiva pov end

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That it , the end

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