ROSEMONDE-A light warriors story by ElishaEnchanted

I like chapter one and the mysterious character jasper. The plot was looking great in their. In chapter 2 the beginning of the chapter was confusing and a little unrelated to chapter 1. Your plot development is great later on. Your character development is superb. The setting you're describing you can imagine it. This book is great and some of the pictures you post are very vivid.

I give you a 4 out of 5 stars.

Any further questions pm me kilzard