Name: Wolfwing

Erm. I'm not sure if cats would name their kits after their foes. Change that?

Age: 23 moons

Gender: She-cat

Sexuality: Bisexual

Clan: IceClan

Yipe! IceClan is overused TO DEATH! How about IcicleClan, or BlizzardClan :D

Rank: Deputy:

Personality: She is a kind, gentle, energetic, loyal, trustworthy, and optimistic cat. But, she has another side to her which is shy, quiet, mysterious, antisocial and absent minded.

*nods*

Looks: She is a white cat with a right black paw, black tail tip, and black around her left eye. Her right eye is green and her left eye is half green half icy blue.

Hmm. Do you mean that her left eye is greenish-blue? Because I've never seen a cat with half-eyes before... HETEROCHROMIA! AAAAAHH!!! I suggest you change that XD

Backstory: She was found by an IceClan patrol in a blizzard as a kit, with her sister, Scarletleaf. Her mother was dead beside her. The father had run away as soon as the patrol had spotted him, so they took WolfWing in and trained her to be a Warrior. Due to the extreme cold, which somehow Wolfwing had managed, made half of her left eye icy blue.

Erm... your backstory needs a little bit more development. I like the father-running-away part, though! And, how did the icy-cold change her EYE a color? You should change that.

Mate: Owlstar ( leader of IceClan)

Crush: Her Mate

Kits: Patchpaw and Blossompaw

Blossompaw is overused, but Patchpaw is good :3

Family: Lily (mother) Rocky (father) Scarletleaf ( sister)

Okay.

Overall Rating: 3.5/10

You got most of your parts off from the unrealistic eye color and name prefix, and the backstory. Change what I suggested, and you'll be howlin' with the wolves :3

(PUNSSS!)