Name- Ghostwhisper

Ooooh! Never seen this name before! But one question- do cats know what ghosts are?

Age- 29 moons

Gender- she-cat

Straight

Clan- ShadowClan

YAY SHADOWCLAN!

Rank- warrior

Personality- Ghostwhisper is shy and aloof. She is slightly timid and stutter-y and hates talking to strangers, so she's not a fan of Gatherings. Much like her name, she is nearly silent and only talks when necessary. She is tender, thoughtful, and fairly quirky once you become her friend, though most of the time is lost in thought.

This is a charming personality. A lot of OC makers make their OCS powerful, indestructible, talkative, popular, and social. I love how you flipped the script on that :3 Keep it up!

Appearance- She's rather small and has white fur that seems to glow in the moonlight. She has silver and black dapples. Her eyes are a chilling icy blue, and she has tufted ears (as you can tell, I have a thing for tufted ears.) She has gray tabby markings on her hind right leg and on her left ear.

That's a unique coloring! Usually, I see a lot of silver tabbies with no other colors. So, good job adding the black!

Backstory- Ghostwhisper originally grew up in the Tribe of Rushing Water, and her former name was Wolf's Howl That Sounds at Dawn. She lived happily with her littermates and family and was content for a while. Back then she wasn't silent, and in fact was very cheerful and happy-go-lucky. One day three rogues were spotted on the territory and were chased off. Not too much was thought about them, but they kept showing up again and again. Always chased off. But one night, Wolf's Howl That Sounds at Dawn woke up early and decided to take a walk. The night was peaceful, and no one would guess what would happen. She returned to her cave to find everyone dead or brutally wounded, and a few dead rogues. She didn't realize they were still there, so she was attacked as well but not killed. She woke up and grieved for a while before moving on to find help. She slowly made her way down to the Clan territories, for she had heard tales of them as a young kit. She was directed by the barn cats Smoky and Floss to where to go to find the Clans and made her way to Shadowclan territory. A patrol found her and heard mysterious whispering near her. A young cat said it was ghosts, and therefore earned the name Ghostpaw. She later became Ghostwhisper. That didn't mean the apprenticeship was easy, though. Ghostpaw was teased and bullied for not being clan-born, and that's when she decided to shut herself off completely; become totally silent, only talking when necessary. Her bullies eventually quit teasing her, and all was well. Ghostpaw was given her warrior name, Ghostwhisper, and only grew sadder and sadder with not talking, for she bottled up her emotions and grief from when she found her family members' dead bodies. She decided to make an expedition to the mountains, and her leader, Blizzardstar, agreed to it. She visited the cave where she grew up, and although their bodies were already rotten and only bones were left, she buried everyone and made a small memorial for her sister, Tiger's Roar at Twilight who she grew up so close with. After this, she returned home and performs regular warrior duties, but every now and then will re-visit her dear sister.

THIS. WAS. AWESOME!! You used the tribe, which many OC makers NEVER used. You added why Ghostwhisper was sad and depressed all the time, and added extreme sadness into her life, without making it a sob story. Extraordinary, good work.

Crush- none

Kits- none

Mate- none

After all that sadness, it would be nice for her to settle down and get a mate :3

Family members

Mother- Leaf's Drift in the Wind (deceased)

Father- Branch where Squirrels Dwell (deceased)

Sister- Tiger's Roar at Twilight (deceased)

Beautiful names :3

Overall Rating: 10/10

I think you know whyyy :3