Name: Narwhal (IDK if this is canon, but there can be multiple dragons with the same name, so eh)

I have honestly NO idea :D It's a cool name, so it's okay.

Gender: Male (I rly like male dragons : T)

:D

Age: 15 years

Tribe: IceWing

Narwhal...IceWing... At first glance, I wouldn't think Narwhal would be an IceWing's name. I would believe that it would be a SeaWing's name. Then again, narwhals DO live in cold climates, so I'll let it slide.

Rank: In the Third Circle

Residence: The IceWing Kingdom

Appearance: Narwhal is a pearly white male, very bulky and strong wings. His eyes are a black like most, and his spikes have a tint of blue. His under scales have a bit more blue as well, though more than his spikes.

Beautiful appearance. And good job making his scale colours natural for an IceWing. :D

Personality: Narwhal is dead loyal. He doesn't care what the orders, he will follow. Even if they involve his death. Narwhal only thinks of two things: loyalty and anger. Narwhal is also very ambitious. The only dragon he's not mad at all the time is royalty and ranks higher than him. He is also caring to his little sister. Otherwise, he is usually very rude and mad at the world.

I love this personality! The traits line up well, and you have an equal amount of good traits and bad traits. But a thing you could change is adding more than two traits. A living being is a complicated thing, having more than two personality traits. Perhaps add at least three more characteristics.

Family:

Mother; Glacé (French for ice)

Father; Hielo (Spanish for ice)

Brother(s); Arctic Fox

Sister(s); Snowy

Mate; None

Dragonets; None

Icy, icy names. I love it!

Backstory: Narwhal was very good friends with many dragons when he was young. Narwhal was very "popular". A dragon named Hiver was helping him train to get into the higher ranks. When his little sister was young, Snowy, he was supposed to watch her. His friends said they would do it for him, as he was supposed to train that day with Hiver. When he came back, Snowy was lying passed out at his friends' house, with everyone else gone. Narwhal was terrified for her safety, and blamed this on everyone, as he thought she was dead until he took her home and realized she was alive. Narwhal blamed this on his friend's and never went to see them again. He also got mad at Hiver and stopped seeing him. This is what caused his "being mad at the world" trait. When Narwhal was seven, he was put in the Fifth Circle, lucky for him, as most IceWings are put in the Seventh and Sixth Circle when turning seven. Narwhal has worked hard to reach his rank, but when he got into the Fourth Circle, something happened to his brother. His brother, Arctic Fox, left the IceWings. He was found dead soon after. Narwhal had not cared, saying it was his fault for leaving. When Narwhal got into the Fourth Circle, his sister was placed in the Sixth Circle. She took her job seriously and now she is now in the Third Circle with Narwhal.

This is a fascinating backstory! I love how he was a well known dragon before his friends neglected his sister. When that happened, he became cold and shunned the world. Change NOTHING :3

Other: He has scars under his left eye, on all his legs, and a small one right underneath the throat. He also has a gold bracelet on his left arm.

Overall Rating: 9.9/10

This was a beautiful OC that I enjoyed looking through and rating. You gave Narwhal a reason for being die-hard loyal and cold, which was shown in his backstory. His appearance was magnificent, and about everything with him was awesome! The little .1 I knocked off was for only having 2-3 personality traits, which I explained up above. Change what I suggested, and you'll avoid walking on thin ice