This is @naomi_boss_lady once again. I am reviewing this lovely book for my good friend @. The name of the book is Dumb blondes(back and better)
Cover: I soo much love your cover, it's sooo cool. I heard you got it from @rainbowusers. I need a cover for my next book. Anyways, they did a very good job on your cover, I require you to thank them.
Title: To be honest I have never seen a book name Dumb blondes (back and better). I have only seen one book named dumb blondes, but not this title. So it makes your story less cliche. Good job on that👍👍👍
Description: I love your description, it is so captivating, unique, and rare. It is not too long and not too long.
Character: I love Stephanie the most, she has this kind of I am not hearing anything cause I am right attitude. I also like Emily, cause she is a person of few words but when you push a button it won't end well.
Grammar &Punctuation: I spotted a few mistakes, please go over the book again and correct errors made there.
Dialogue: I really love your dialogues especially the way you began the book, the conversation about grapes and strawberries. I am on team Stephanie.
Pacing: Your pacing is normal, not too fast not too slow, unlike The billionaire's ex-wife. Anyways good job also👍👍👍
Hook: It is fun but no cliff hangers, I know it is still the beginning of your book but there are no cliffhangers. Pls look into that
Readers enjoyment: I like your book, it's nice and the cover is just so good
This was reviewed by Naomi for Naomi. Yeah that's right, we are name sakes.
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