So I'm making a new story and I want to know what you guys think

So here's the cover(I made it myself an I'm so proud of how it turned out XD)

I made it a bit too wide but I think I'll live

And here's the story desc:
The Dark Forest has won. All because of Ivypool. Firestar is dead. So is Blackstar. Onestar went insane mere days after the defeat and was found drowned by the lake. Mistystar was killed again and again until she was on her last life.

Dovewing was heartbroken when Whitewing was killed trying to get Birchfall back. Tigerheart had switched sides and he and Dovewing became mates. Their kits were born and raised to live by the Warrior Code.

"Don't listen to them, they kill innocent cats," the two would recite to the kits. But there was one who had taken an interest in a certain Dark Forest she-cat.

What life choices will this kit face? What betrayals will he make? And what will he do to prove he's worth this she-cat's love?

Read to find out.

Idrk, I feel like I could do better but hey, I wanna hear what you guys think

- Crimson