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𝟝. Keep Bleeding Love by EastCoastPinay 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 18/20

Book already has a wonderful hook.

Concept 8/10

Book seems a tiny bit cliche but was great despite that.

Cover 9/10

The cover fits the story well but doesn't have that unique element to it.

The book description 10/10

The description was beautifully written. And hints enough about the story, without giving too much away

Technicalities 48/50

Very few grammatical errors, nothing that can't be fixed in editing.

Total 93/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

This story kept me hooked straight from chapter one. I was waiting to see how the protagonist will face her loss. The plot was good and I can see that future development is in a good phase.

Concept 8/10

The concept is not very new to Wattpad but it has some differences from the typical teenage pregnancy stories I have come across. The idea of loss is explored through angst and that develops this storyline.

Cover 8/10

Nice cover. Very common on Wattpad but looks good.

The book description 8/10

The description is good. A bit dramatic but nice.

Technicalities 39/50

The writing style is great. I feel during the first five chapters the pace of the story was good but after that, it moved really fast..like Cid's suddenly a very changed guy and he's asking her for a chance...I wanted to see a bit more development with their relationship before jumping straight to a romantic entanglement. Vocabulary is great, but grammatical mistakes are there. Although that can be edited easily but honestly, I felt the story was rushed.

Total 80/100

Total from both judges 173/200

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𝟜. The Burden of Us by MiniMoxx 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 15/20

Book has a wonderful hook to it, I have not lost interest in the book yet.

Concept 9/10

Book doesn't seem cliche.

Cover 7/10

The cover could have a little more to it. But I like it.

The book description 10/10

The book was described very well.

Technicalities 49/50

Very few grammatical errors. Great job!!

Total 90/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 16/20

Absolutely interesting. As a lover of romance, I would recommend this one to anyone looking for a quick taste of romance with a pinch of reality to it. I mean definitely, the plot is a bit common as per Wattpad, but it captures your attention in its own way. A good read.

Concept 9/10

It starts off as cliché just like many novels on Wattpad but there's a twist. I absolutely loved that it's not as predictable as it seems in the beginning. By the end of chapter 10, we find out she is taking a different way to fight for her current relationship rather than complying with that arranged marriage.

Cover 9/10

Beautiful cover. I like it.

The book description 8/10

The book description is nice. A bit dry but I would definitely like to go further because it's not too shabby. Described well enough, but makes it look a bit typical with the same concept of arranged marriages. The story is very different from that..so a bit of improvisation could be made.

Technicalities 42/50

Ok, the paragraphs are longer than life. At some places, it goes on and on. I noticed a few grammatical mistakes and typos. Punctuation needs some focus too but overall it's alright, the writing style is pleasing. The character description is good, I like how you work on the aesthetics. I think you should clip down the paragraphs because on Wattpad, readers are used to shorter chapters. If it's for publishing purposes, then it's good to go.

Total 84/100

Total from both judges 174/200

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𝟛. But you sent me away by mellimack 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 15/20

The book is very well written and has me instantly hooked.

Concept 8/10

Book seems pretty unique but is a little cliche.

Cover 10/10

The cover fits the story really well and is very creative

The book description 10/10

Books description has me very interested to find more out

Technicalities 48/50

There were a few grammatical errors here and there but nothing major, it nothing that could confuse me.

Total 91/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

Absolutely engaging. I kept going and going. I would totally recommend this book to people.

Concept 9/10

The old concept with a new touch. Teenage pregnancies, one of the very common themes on Wattpad. Meeting after a few years of separation, once again a common one. But. The time gap between these incidents and the character development gave it a golden brush-up.

Cover 7/10

Same cover as the last time. It's very beautiful but I feel it's too simple.

The book description 9/10

Beautiful description. I liked it.

Technicalities 44/50

The book is amazing. I absolutely loved the writing style. Some paragraphs were a bit too long and the chapter length was too much for Wattpad but at the same time, the story has only 13 chapters. It's a ride for sure. The character development is so good and gradual. I didn't find a single mistake with the vocabulary. The grammar was also good. Some punctuation errors were there but overall the story is good to go.

Total 86/100

Total from both judges 177/200

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𝟚. Romance of the Portals by kakolilaha6 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 15/20

Already I am hooked, and loving the story. I think this story is really well written.

Concept 9/10

Book doesn't seem cliche.

Cover 7/10

I don't think that the cover correlates with the story. But it is a very unique cover.

The book description 10/10

The description describes the book wonderfully, I am already hooked into the story, just by reading the description.

Technicalities 45/50

Great start so far. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, it is really well written.

Total 86/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

I love this book. Honestly, one of the most aesthetically pleasing books I have read. The description is off the charts. It's just so beautiful.

Concept 10/10

The vibrant mix of fantasy, romance, adventure, and romance. The mix just comes out with an excellent result. It's so fresh and you can find yourself absolutely mesmerized. Beautiful!

Cover 10/10

It's just gorgeous. Absolutely breathtaking alright!

The book description 10/10

Very eye-catching. I didn't even think about getting right into it. It's so nicely drafted and you can just feel the emotions and the power the story brings.

Technicalities 45/50

I noticed a few grammatical mistakes. Ex- Commas, lack of spaces between words. Nothing that made me too concerned. The chapter length is perfect. The description is just beautiful and I felt the character development is a little bit fast but then I guess it's a whirlwind romance as I understand that they are destined for each other, so that makes sense too. Overall, a lovely book.

Total 93/100

Total from both judges 179/200

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𝟙. On the Edge of Tomorrow by 0liviaRose436 

Judge Ilovewildhorses20 

Engagement 20/20

Book has me hooked and wanting to finish it within a few minutes.

Concept 7/10

The concept is cliche with the separation time gap, but I still loved the book

Cover 9/10

I love the cover, it is very unique and eye-catching.

The book description 9/10

The Book description is beautifully written and goes well with the story.

Technicalities 45/50

The book is beautifully written. With no grammatical errors as far as I can tell.

Total 90/100

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 19/20

I love music. This book was everything I envisioned and more from Wattpad. It has a different vibe to it that kept me going. One can just get lost in the melody of words through this book. Absolutely beautiful.

Concept 9/10

The storyline was fresh and musical! I have read quite a few stories about pop stars and rock bands but this one pulled off the plug from the typical and gave a different meaning to romance through writing.

Cover 7/10

The cover is nice but honestly, I liked the old cover much more. Maybe it's just me, but the yellow and black played like chords on a guitar for this book.

The book description 9/10

Lovely description. I loved it. Interesting enough to catch anyone's attention.

Technicalities 47/50

Honestly, I could not find any major grammatical errors. The character development is great. It's gradual and the story has a nice pace. Just like the last time, I am in awe of the writing style. It's so beautiful and unique.

Total 91/100

Total from both judges 181/200

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