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1. The Lost Revenge BY DeathBlade__

Title - 10/10

Cover - 8/ 10

Blurb - 7/10

Plot - 15/15

Creativity - 15/15

Grammar - 13/15

Characters - 5/5

Interaction with the reader - 5/5

An overall review -15/ 15

Total points 93/100

Review:
The story is just awesome that's what I can say. Almost everything is perfect. Now why cut the marks?
the reason to cut marks is the cover I fell that the cover is the thing that attracts an reader although it is good but didn't give that fantasy vibes as the story is.
The blurb is good it gives all the information about the character but it is quite lengthy. I even found some grammatical mistake so that why cut marks.
Rest the story is more than amazing and your thinking is really great.

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2. Saudade BY iodinepottasium

Title - 10/10

Cover - 9/ 10

Blurb - 10/10

Plot - 15/15

Creativity - 15/15

Grammar - 15/15

Characters - 5/5

Interaction with the reader - 5/5

An overall review -14/ 15

Total points: 98 /100

Review:
The story is amazing. I even like the title but it lacks somewhere when it comes to cover although it is dark showcase the fantasy but it is lacking at some points. Blurb is awesome it tell everything about the story not even too lengthy. Plot, creativity and level of imagination is marvelous. There is no grammatical mistake to be found at least in first 5 chapters. It really interact reader very well even I didn't know when I reached to 6th chapter.
You just need to increase length of chapter rest everything is perfect.

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3. Grave skies BY cowardlydawg

Cover - 9/ 10

Blurb - 8/10

Plot - 15/15

Creativity - 13.5/15

Grammar - 15/15

Characters - 5/5

Interaction with the reader - 3/5

An overall review -15/ 15

Total points: 92.5 /100

Review:
The story has some unique concept but I believe that title and cover could have been more better. The blurb is quite lengthy.
And some creative could be done in the story to increase the interaction with reader. Remaining everything is alright including the length of chapter is also a lot to keep the reader engaged.

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4. The Trial BY mosaicopine

Title - 10/10

Cover - 10/ 10

Blurb - 9/10

Plot - 14/15

Creativity - 15/15

Grammar -15 /15

Characters -4 /5

Interaction with the reader - 4/5

An overall review -14/ 15

Total points: 95/100

Review:
The story is best in it's own ways I love the style you wrote, it was kinda discriptive. But I really felt the need of character sketch of other side character too. The blurb was lengthy you could have deducted some points to make it a bit short you could have even added some more twists to make the plot more interesting to interact more readers. Overall I loved the story it just lacks at few points.

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5. Elf's reticulant mate BY @CrysTravel2019

Title - 10/10

Cover - 10/ 10

Blurb - 10/10

Plot -15 /15

Creativity - 13/15

Grammar - 15/15

Characters - 4/5

Interaction with the reader -3 /5

An overall review -14/ 15

Total points:94 /100

Review:
Title, cover, blurb, plot was all good. I personally felt that the story could have been more creative. A character sketch was needed as it creates confusen. I didn't felt that interaction with the story and lastly I would suggest to increase the length of the chapters as it helps to interact with user.

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6. Adeline and the Ovunque's key BY Bridget_Boyd

Title - 8/10

Cover -9 / 10

Blurb - 8/10

Plot -15 /15

Creativity - 15/15

Grammar - 14/15

Characters - 4/5

Interaction with the reader -5/5

An overall review -15/ 15

Total points: 93/100

Review:
the title is kinda long and the cover is quite simple to match fantasy vibes. Even blurb was very long , I found some of the grammatical mistakes and more character could have been included with proper character sketch. The plot is amazing with the imagination power of yours to interact reader very well.
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7. Fallen moon BY Moon_G0ddess

Title -10 /10

Cover - 10/ 10

Blurb - 8/10

Plot -15/15

Creativity - 15/15

Grammar -15 /15

Characters - 5/5

Interaction with the reader -5/5

An overall review -14.5/ 15

Total points: 97.5/100

Review:
I loved the plot it was something different the cover and title even gives fantasy vibes but the blurb was lengthy I suggest to exclude some points. Rest the story is amazing!

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8. Five sisters, warriors of finella BY Kathy_Marwin

Title - 9/10

Cover - 9.5/ 10

Blurb - 10/10

Plot -15/15

Creativity -15 /15

Grammar - 15/15

Characters - 4/5

Interaction with the reader -3/5

An overall review -14/ 15

Total points: 94.5/100

Review:
The story seemed unique but I didn't find fantasy till the chapter I read maybe it could be in further chapter a character sketch was needed it hard to recognize the character and keep them mind. Honestly I didn't felt that attracted towards the story.
Rest the chapters we're long which I really appreciate.
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9. Legends of Taljin: Secrets of the sword BY scrabblepost

Cover - 10/ 10

Blurb - 8/10

Plot -15/15

Creativity -14 /15

Grammar - 15/15

Characters - 4/5

Interaction with the reader -5/5

An overall review -15/ 15

Total points: 96/100

Review:
The blurb was quite lengthy. You could be more creative by adding some more twists and a characters were not described in detail. I really loved the unique plot.
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10. Mo Ghile Mear BY almostgabrielle

Title - 9/10

Cover - 10/ 10

Blurb -6 /10

Plot -15/15

Creativity - 13/15

Grammar - 15/15

Characters - 5/5

Interaction with the reader -4/5

An overall review -14.5/ 15

Total points: 91.5/100

Review:
The story is nice. I didn't found any specific thing in blurb which could describe the plot of the story. Interaction was ok-ok although the plot is unique few more things could be added to it to interact with readers. The chapters were Long and I appreciate that

══════・❃・WINNERS・❃・══════

First Position

Saudade
BY iodinepottasium

Second Position

Fallen Moon
BY Moon_G0ddess

Third Position

Legend of Taljin
By scrabblepost

══════・❃・CONGRATS ・❃・══════

Thank you everyone for your cooperation and also a special thanks to
Prachi_2009 for judging this genre!

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