✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: katopark
✧ Book :: Algor Mortis

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◖Basics :: 14.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Gorgeous and suits the book.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ It's very confusing, I have no idea what the general premise of this book is, the sentence structures are also a bit off so it makes it even harder to understand what's going on.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ Unique and suits the book.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ It's a good book over all, the only problem being the rushed writing and planning. I think if you were to lengthen your chapters a bit and add a little bout before this situation it would feel more real.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 06 | 10

◍ To me, it didn't feel like a stand-alone story. It felt more like an episode of a show, rather than a show itself. Let me put it this way, it felt complete on its own, but it still felt like it had context that should've been shown in the previous episode. I understand it's a short story, but it still was very rushed. The build up needs a little more work and the plot twist wasn't as surprising as I expected.

○ Writing Style :: 09 | 10

◍ Standard. Descriptive and nice. Not much to comment on.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 17 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 08 | 10

◍ Some wrong tenses but I don't think they're from lack of knowledge more from not noticing them. Running the chapters through a program (Grammarly or google docs) or getting a beta should help those.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 09 | 10

◍ Nice and apt use of vocabulary. I especially enjoyed the medical terms you've included so if feel more real.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 07 | 10

◍ To be honest, I didn't feel much. Maybe it's just me but I didn't feel connected to the characters and the betrayals and the ending didn't emotionally affect me. I think this goes back to it being a short story because you've tried your best to connect the readers to the characters.

○ Character Development :: 05 | 10

◍ It was a short story and there wasn't much development. The characters were nice but a little predictable. The reveal of Iseul wasn't surprising but Saem's was. The characters need to have more characteristics and life —excuse the pun— in them. It all felt very bland to me.

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Total :: 58.5 | 80

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