✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: ChumaniExposito4
✧ Book :: Hybrid

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◖Basics :: 14 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ I think the cover can be more relatable. Though the theme was relatable, the pictures used can be changed. You can put something more interesting and something which describes the story more. Else, it was okay.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The description of the book was good and exciting for the start for the book. It did increase my curiosity and I didn't see any overwriting in it. So good with that. But the info you posted about the book should be in disclaimer of book and not in the blurb. It only contains the glimpse about the plot of the book.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ The title describes the story well. It is totally relatable to what the plot is and though it is common, still it is unique as per the plot and attracts me towards the story. So good with that.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ The plot was good, the writing style was good too and characters were relatable but Dimitri needs more screen space. And grammar needs to improved. You can increase vocabulary usage though the plot was written in an interesting way.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ The plot is common, but the way you put it out, not leaving any plot holes really increased my interest. I didn't see any extra information which can make the story boring or any other thing which needs to told but hasn't been. Everything was given and also written briefly enough to keep me hooked.

○ Writing Style :: 09 | 10

◍ The writing style doesn't need any improvement as of now, the starting was really interesting with a painful yet comedy line, the way the set up was described was just so good.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 10 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 05 | 10

◍ In chapter one, you have written price. I think you wanted to write prince there. There are some of these editing mistakes so I suggest you re-read the chapter after writing it. In some places, you haven't used correct punctuation marks. In some places, when you finished a sentence, the starting of next sentence was not done by a capital letter. Remember, after we end a sentence by a full stop, question mark, we use capital letters. Also in some places, you forgot to use inverted commas to indicate that the character is speaking.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 05 | 10

◍ I think the vocabulary can be improved. If you use different phrases or terms related to the facts about vampires, as your plot is based on it, you can make the content more creative and enjoyable.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 09 | 10

◍ The emotions did their work. The way you described the feelings of terror, sadness, pain and other emotions which Freya felt was just amazing. It did made me feel and I could relate to her more.

○ Character Development :: 07 | 10

◍ Everything is described well in the story so I think the character development is going good. But try to give more screen space to Dimitri too in the starting as well so that readers can know and relate to him more.

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Total :: 57 | 80

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