✧ Reviewer :: _Writing_Beauty_
✧ Reviewee :: Tuneofhisflute
✧ Book :: You're My Ecstasy

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◖Basics :: 18 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 04 | 05

◍ To be very honest, the cover is really amazing, it matches the story's theme, the font, color scheme and everything is absolutely incredible. What you can improve is the font size, it's too small, you can make it large, so it appears better and more attractive. Also, the author's name is too small, I couldn't even figure out what it was.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ You know, your description is short, but it is one of the best blurbs I've seen on Wattpad. It's short, yet very effective and efficient, really attractive. Written in simple and appealing words, which needs to be appreciated.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ It is good, and also matches the theme of the book.

⚘ Execution :: 4.5 | 05

◍ You've amazingly executed the whole book, it's really aesthetic and beautiful, every single chapter. It was fun to read.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ At first sight, the book sounded cliché, but no it's definitely not. The plot sounded common at the start of the book, but it's not. Then, in the same way, the amount of creativity can be better, you can think calmly about what you can improve, and how? I'll talk further in 'writing style'.

○ Writing Style :: 09 | 10

◍ So, the book is good, as I said earlier, but you know it's getting boring in the first few chapters which play a strong role in the reader's thought. You need to make the first few chapters more interesting because they sound quite boring or cliché. Some parts seem rushed, some seem too detailed, you need to maintain them both, which is in a few chapters done in a good way, but the rest, not certainly.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 16 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 09 | 10

◍ Your grammar is good so far, I didn't find many errors, except for a few punctuation. There were no grammatical mistakes, or spelling errors either.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 07 | 10

◍ You have nice and quite good vocabulary but it may improve. You can always search up for some synonyms, it looks more appealing.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 08 | 10

◍ As I said earlier, in 'writing style', sometimes, it's rushed or sometimes too detailed, so detailed parts help to convey emotions in a better way, so yeah.

○ Character Development :: 06 | 10

◍ The characters are good, but they've not made many developments, but it doesn't matter, since the story is not very long with short chapters.

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Total :: 64 | 80

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