Book: The Treble With Love

                                                                        By ocelot101

                                                                        Reviewer: Praahi

About the Story:

The Treble with Love is a story of a seventeen-year-old girl named Sabrina who is in love with her sister's boyfriend, Jack. Apart from Jack, she loves music and writes her own songs. Her talent earns her good friends while her sister with a very bad voice gets selected as a lead singer only because she is beautiful and as Jack owns the band. She being a sensible girl stands by her sister no matter what. To know whether Sabrina and Jack are destined together, or destiny has some other plan for Sabrina, must wait for the upcoming parts.

· It's an ongoing story with 18 chapters updated.

Review:

- The title is unique and apt for the story as the main concept revolves around music and love.

- The cover is innovative with a mike going around the title, but I felt it could be made more attractive as cover is the first thing that catches reader's attention. You can get one in our Gloss creations available on our profile the_gloss_club

- Good prologue posted as description. It gives a gist of the story which is very interesting and would force the reader to get into the story.

- Character introduction is always recommended to be in the beginning so that the readers would be familiar with all the characters throughout the story.

- Language is the only bridge between a writer and a reader. So, a story with perfect tense and right usage of words would make it easier for the reader to understand. While reading the story, I found few typos, missing punctuation's and few grammatical mistakes which can be corrected by proof reading.

- There is a good improvement in each passing chapter and I loved the songs which I guess were self-composed, right? I must admit those were tough to write.

- Coming to the plot, though you have selected a common theme as of teenage love story but the way you narrated it has made it unique and beautiful story to read. The flow and the shift from one scene to another is so smooth and clear that there is no chance of confusion.

*I don't like to comment much on plot because I personally feel, that is totally a writer's imagination and I don't have much right to speak about it.

Need to Improve:

- Grammar and punctuation. (small things like "your" is written instead of "you are" in few places)

- Character description.

Best things:

- I loved the title. The words used are so perfect that the title itself is quite enough to grab reader's attention. Must appreciate the creativity.

- Good flow and narration of the story, though a little bit of suspense would have added an extra flavor to the love story.

- Nice usage of words for composing songs.

Overall, I would recommend this story to all those who love reading romantic stories.

Note: My aim is not to be harsh or dominating. Hope I have not offended you dear. Keep writing and all the best for all your future projects.

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