Book: We Need You

                                                                         Author: siri_reddy

Reviewer: Praahi

About the book: 

We Need You is a Fan-Fiction of current Indian Cricket Team mainly about Mahendra Singh Dhoni, the former Indian cricket team captain. The story starts with a terrible news about Mahi being attacked by terrorists in Kashmir when he joined the army for two months after the world cup. It is all about how the team reacted to the news, and all their emotions for a man who is not less than an elder brother for them. 

* A short story with just three beautiful chapters.

Review:

- The cover is graceful with the man in army uniform indicating the sole idea of the story but a book cover must have title and author's name on it. So, please do add them to make it proper. 

- "We Need You" is apt for the plot as you have narrated the pain of losing the man whom the whole team loved the most.

- As it is a short story, I agree that it would be a bit difficult to write an elaborate description or prologue but a small one giving the overview of the story is must because along with the cover and the title, prologue plays an important role in deciding whether the reader wants to invest his/her time or not. 

- Coming to the plot, it is very simple concept but still I would say a difficult one to write, as you have to portray each and every team member's emotion and their affection towards their elder brother. Though it is a small story, you maintained that suspense and emotion all through the story and I am sure your narration would have brought tears in the eyes of the readers.

- To convey your view properly, it is always required to use good vocabulary and try to minimize grammatical errors as much as possible. You have maintained the same tense throughout, so that's not a problem.

 - Whenever, there is a need to use any other language other than English, do translate in English then and there so that every reader can understand it without any trouble.

Need to Improve:

- Work more on grammar and punctuation.

- Though Indian Cricket Team is well known, it is always recommended to have character description to make your story reader friendly.

- Get the best cover to reach wide range of audience. You can get one from the "Gloss Creations".

Best Things:

- The plot and the narration are the best. Not even at a single point, I felt it to be boring. The story is very engaging.

* When everything is perfect, it is very difficult to find flaws and I really had a tough time in searching for the negative points as it is one of my favorite stories. Do write more such stories and please don't take my words to your heart. All the best. 

Overall, I would recommend this story to all the Indian Cricket Team fans especially, M.S. Dhoni's fans. I am sure you would cry reading it.

Thank you,

Praahi.

                                                                               
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