Title: AMONG BEASTS–Part I: Vermilion Son
Author: NicoGonzalez504
Reviewed by EsmeRose1

If the Golden Novels club was a competition, this book could win.

The only issue I have with this book is the dialogue. The way the dialogue is written can be a little confusing in some parts, and some of the grammar wrong, but knowing that you have been translating your book to English from another language, I overlooked these minor details while reviewing it.

Something that made me immediately fall in love with this story (and then rush back to my personal account to add it to my library) was the description and detail that was put into the writing.

Another thing I liked about the story was how it was split up into smaller sections and the use of pictures to show another part of the story.

Here is an example of the grammar issues that I saw:

The first thing is that there should be a comma (,) after the word "here." The second thing is that the "M" in "mother" should be capitalized because it is being used as a name in that sentence.

Other than that, you did a great job.

Overall rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4/5)