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I want to say that I saw no grammar errors in your book so good job on that.

I also want to say that I liked the cover and colors of the book. In my opinion, it screams Sci-fi. So good job.

I also liked the plot and characters so far. I also liked how you described how the world works without info dumping it and how you slowly build upon the world as the story goes on.

Overall, it's a good story and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly