Sakura eyes by: naeomiiii
Requested by: naeomiiii

First off I want to talk about the cover of the book. I loved the cover and how pretty it was and how it gave off that fantasy sort of vibe to it.

The second thing that I want to talk is the summary of the book. The summary starts off good but I felt like the rest of it needs a bit more work. I still enjoyed the fact that it tells you what the story is about but it doesn't really feel like a summary, more like something out of a paragraph within the story itself. It could have gave the summary a bit more mystery to it which is well done in the little quote but like I said after that, it's done poorly. (note I won't be using the quote in the example I am about to show since it's fine as is and doesn't need to be fixed).

Example of a decent summary:

In a distant land, an evil king is turning people into demons and villages are suffering from a lack of resources. An eighteen year old girl begins to uncover things not only about her mom but the world around her too. As she begins to explore her new identity in a world that all but foreign to her, she not only has to stand up for what's right but fight a battle that she never knew was happening.

It's short but it still includes what your story is about while drawing in the readers. But of course this is just an example of what I was trying to explain before about it needing a bit more work.

I also want to talk about the pacing and any grammar errors in the book as well. There was no grammar errors in the book and I thought the pacing was okay. I want to quickly add something about the writing style of the story as well. I also liked the plot of the book as well and thought it was interesting so far.

Next, I want to talk about the characters and settings. First let's talk about the settings. I like the settings and how they're described within the story. The descriptions give you enough to where you can see what's happening and what's going on as well. Plus, I think they help set up the story pretty good.

Next is the characters. First I want to talk about the main character. The main character was okay but I felt like she didn't have much personality to her other than her being a Tom boy of sorts and being head strong and a bit reckless. Plus, I found it odd that she didn't have an actual name like her younger sister May did and kept being called sis or miss by other people in the book. I don't know if her name gets mentioned later on, but I did think that it was odd that her given name wasn't mentioned in the summary or in the book. The other characters I thought were okay and none of them really annoyed me too much so far and I found it hard keeping up on who was who since we get introduced to a bunch of characters in the first few chapters alone.

Overall, it's a decent book and I would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly