Frozen grimoire: nocturnal silhouette by: Sarakel_14
Requested by: Sarakel_14

I really like the writing style of your book and how you describe things within the story as well. I also love the history and plot so far even though there's like two chapters out right now.

But I want to say that I found some of the words that you used in sentences and paragraphs a bit cringing and out of place, for example:

You said average male in that first paragraph there when you could have said man instead. Readers would still get you're talking about a man since man and male are basically the same thing.

You put the word "left" in that sentence rather than the word "leave" there as well. I would recommend editing it.

There are a few other examples that I could point out as well but I don't want to point out all of them here in this review.

So, I would recommend that you go back and edit your book since like I said there are words that made it either feel cringe worthy or left and don't fit well into the sentence so I would also recommend you get a dictionary and look up to better fit what you're trying to say there since it can help out a lot when you're writing a story and haven't edited it yet.

Overall, it's got great potential and it is a good book. I would totally recommend this book to anyone who loves a fantasy like story.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly