Lie of Dawn by: @EuphoricCoffee_
Requested by: @EuphoricCoffee_

First off, I want to say that I love the cover of the story. It definitely gives me that fantasy adventure sort of vibe and I love the font and colors you have on it.

I also like the pacing and plot so far in the story as well. I could also tell that there were no grammar errors in this story too.

The plot and pacing like I said were pretty good and I loved how you explained the town's history and why people weren't allowed to across the bridge in the first place.

I also liked how you showed the relationship between the main character and his family rather than just telling us this, so good job on that part as well.

I am also curious about what is going to happen once the main character and his brother reach the palace and why they were sent for to begin with and how the story goes from there.

Overall, it's an amazing story and deserves more reads than it does. I would totally recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy books.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly