Stereotypical American Family by: @KiyaAnimations
Requested by: @KiyaAnimations

I like the interesting story and how you made the story into a comic of sorts but there maybe a couple things that I had noticed when reading your story.

The first thing being that you had abbreviations for dialogue which doesn't make sense to me because if they're talking shouldn't they have quotation marks and not a abbreviation since they're talking and not doing an action. Unless you were doing a play or screen play sort of format, there's no reason for you do that.

The second thing is why you have the first few chapters in a comic like format but don't that for later chapters. My guess is you got tired of doing that and just didn't do it anymore. Plus I felt the whole comic thing in the first chapters was interesting but it felt like the comic could have been on another website like WEBTOON cause you took screenshots of your story which is fine if you're showing what something or someone looks like but to me personally, it felt like it wasn't needed because you could have easily written on Wattpad without doing it in a comic book like format and it would have been fine.

So, I would totally recommend that you pick wether or not you want to continue writing your book in a comic book like format or write in another format and stick with it because it will confuse a few people if you wrote it like a comic but then wrote like a screen play later on. Other than that there were no grammar errors in this book.

I would recommend this book to anyone who looks South Park and wants to read a book like it.
Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly