Bride to three by: @AngelSanyal
Requested by: @AngelSanyal

I think the concept of the story is interesting. But I did notice a few grammar errors in the story. I would recommend fixing that. Plus I feel like the plot is a bit rushed and that it could slow down just a bit, so we could have to process what's happening and get to know the characters but I do know that there's a cast chapter in case you want to know the characters before the story starts but not everyone reads it and just want to read the story and enjoy the plot of the story.

Overall, it's a good story and has potential to be an amazing book but could be improved a bit more.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly