Before Sixteen by: Donaldprince
Requested by: Donaldprince

I liked the concept of the story and plot of it. There were some grammar errors but not a lot that affects the story too much. But I did feel like the pacing of the story was a bit rushed and felt like things weren't being flushed well enough for us to really know the characters or their backgrounds to be attached to them other than what they're going through since a lot of what's going on is relatable to a lot of people who've maybe been through some of the things that each character went through.

But I also felt like the characters were all one sided and didn't have a lot of personality to them aside from the cliche personalities that you see in a lot of tv shows or other books with the same tropes of the mean and popular girl and crew, play boy, hot love interest who may or may not be a jock or player, the outcast who the main character befriends, the best friend who sometimes gets ditched by the main character for the popular crowd, etc.

But I liked how you drove into topics that a lot of people don't also go into like suicide and rape. But I even wished that these topics were flushed out and done better because the plot was being rushed along so we didn't get much time exploring these topics and how it affects people.

Overall, it's a good story and has potential but would recommend editing it a bit more.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly