Hurdles in the path by: Tallshadow1221
Requested by: Tallshados1221

Quick side note before I begin this review. I had posted a review about this book before and as some of you know, I usually review the first few chapters of a story which I had did for this story as well but the author wasn't happy with my review of their story and what I had to say in that review and insisted that I had to read their entire book, so rather than argue with this person about how I do things for my review center and not wanting it to turn into a big drama over how to handle criticism and what not, I decided to redo their review. So, here is the review. Let's begin.

First, I found the concept and world interesting once the story added in more to what was going on and to what was happening to the characters.

But, I also did find at some parts to be a bit cliche and at other times, to be predictable for this kind of story. I like a good superhero story as much as the next person but this peculiar story felt in terms of backstory for a lot if not most of the characters to be a bit lack luster. I barely knew some of the characters aside from dialogue which made me not have much of a connection with them to begin with so, as the story went on, I just didn't care for them as much even when they were danger or were doing a sports event.

Now, if you have seen the last review of the story, then you know what I thought previously about it and what I thought needed to be fixed within it. I did show some interest in it but not enough to where I wanted to read it cause I enjoyed it. I had to force myself to do so, because of what the author had requested and for me to get a better idea on what was happening which I don't like doing with books because it makes a less enjoyable read for me, which I am sure a lot of people can relate to.

But it does have potential to be an amazing story and I am not saying that the author should give up writing or anything just the opposite in fact. I know the author might think otherwise but still, it has potential to be great. Every story does. With a bit of editing, hard work, time and patience, it can get there. Just remember not everyone will enjoy it but that doesn't mean someone else won't.

Overall, it's a decent story and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly