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The Mute Autokid by: TeamBumbleBlades
Requested by: TeamBumbleBlades

First, I want to talk about your book's cover. In all honesty, it doesn't stand out and could use some work. Like if it had a title on it or had something that maybe shown more of what your story was about then people might want to check it out especially if it's a cover that can really drawn in readers and have them read the summary and story if they're interested. So, I would recommend using a cover maker app or have someone who really knows how to do graphic design well so, it's a nice cover and not a terrible one.

Also, I didn't really see any grammar errors in your book so good job on that.

The pacing of the story is okay, thought it was okay.

I also liked how it was an interesting take on transformers fanfiction as well, since I don't really come across transformers fanfiction on Wattpad since usually its buried under mountains upon mountains of other books so, that was to see on here for a change of pace.

Overall, it's a decent book and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books about transformers and fanfiction.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly

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