Cursed by: kaity290
Requested by: kaity290

I definitely enjoyed this story a lot so far. I also liked the plot of the story as well.
But I did notice quite a few grammar errors in the story as well. So, I would recommend going back and fixing them so, it's much better to read.

I also like the tiny hints you leave in the story to what the overall plot is about in the chapters as well, good job on that.

I also liked the cover of the book as well. It definitely fits the story very well and it gives the reader the idea that it's meant to be a scary story. So kudos to you on a job well done.

Overall, it's a great story and would recommend it to anyone who wants to read books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly