The bride of Captain Robin Blackbeard and the bloodthirsty rose by: zaraanne07
Requested by: zaraanne07

I want to start this review by saying on how beautiful your book cover is. It gives me that sense of adventure and piracy that you expect from a story about pirates and a bit of a fantasy thrown in there too. The colors in my opinion blend together beautiful and it was actually the first thing that got my attention when I was going to review this book. So, good job on that.

Plus I didn't see any grammar errors in your book as far I could but I did want to bring up something about some of your sentences. More specifically the word choice in some of them. One sentence I remember reading had catch up rather caught up in the sentence since that's what I assumed you're trying to say in that moment. I noticed the same thing but with different sentences in different places of the chapters that I had read so far. So, I would recommend that you go back fix this, since it could flow much better and make it more easier to read so it isn't so hard to read. But if you still have trouble coming up in with words that would fit those sentences, I would also recommend a dictionary as well to help you with it too.

But I also did the story taking the whole Blackbeard storyline and putting a twist on it. I also felt connected to the main character being overwhelmed by everything in her life and wanting a totally different life from the life she was currently living.

Overall, it's a good story and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

-Traveler_lilly